Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Pleiades

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- Deluxe - Pleiades D -

Dear faithful diary

Dawn beautiful and pink

Dazzling early sunrise

Deference in silence

Describing with the soul

Deserves admiration

Deep ... deeper part of me









29/08 2016
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
http://www.howmanysyllables.com
Each line has only 6 syllables
(poem in the Pleiades form)

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Bl Devnath September 26, 2016 at 11:03 AM A nice creation my lovely lovely friend. A 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl Anne-Lise Andresen September 28, 2016 at 1:19 PM - Thanks for the comments a 7 and friendly visit, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman September 1, 2016 at 7:55 PM Anne-Lise, a unique description of a diary. Congrats on your win! Blessings! Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2016 at 2:28 AM - Thanks for my win Kim, nice to participate in your contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper September 1, 2016 at 7:53 PM Congratulations, Anne-Lise, wonderful poem. Hugs Eve Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2016 at 2:27 AM - Thank you Eve, for friendly visits and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock September 1, 2016 at 3:37 PM I used to keep a diary and then stopped but when I think about it I really should start keeping one again. Nicely done of this form. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2016 at 2:26 AM - Thanks for the comments and friendly visit, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus September 1, 2016 at 11:57 AM Always a pleasure to be back with congratulations...well done, Anne-Lise:) Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2016 at 2:15 PM - Thanks for re- reading and congrats, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May September 1, 2016 at 10:06 AM Congrats on your win Sunshine Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2016 at 10:53 AM - Thank you Joseph, for friendly visits and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe September 1, 2016 at 6:39 AM Congrats on your placement, Anne-Lise. I enjoyed your poem. Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2016 at 10:53 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and congrats, Agnes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta September 1, 2016 at 5:13 AM Beautiful Pleiades ... Congratulations ... Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2016 at 5:14 AM - Thank you Probir for friendly visits and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam September 1, 2016 at 2:15 AM Excellent. Heartfelt and touching write. I do liked this nostalgic. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2016 at 3:59 AM - Thanks for the comments and friendly visit, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong September 1, 2016 at 12:43 AM I am happy to see this on the winners list Anne-Lise. Congratulations! ; ) Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2016 at 5:10 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and congrats, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley September 1, 2016 at 12:37 AM Very, very nice little piece, Anne-Lise, congrats! Viv x Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2016 at 5:10 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and congrats, Viv - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beautiful Scars August 31, 2016 at 8:04 PM Anne-Lise, just beautiful lady...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2016 at 5:09 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and congrats, Laura - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior August 31, 2016 at 7:47 PM A lovely way to describe a diary Annie-Lise...best of luck in contest...god bless...^WW^ Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2016 at 4:00 AM - Thanks for the comments and friendly visit, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph P. DiMino August 31, 2016 at 11:20 AM Very lovely writing! Soothing and introspective. Anne-Lise Andresen August 31, 2016 at 11:25 AM - Thanks for the comments and friendly visit, Joe :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Ainsley August 30, 2016 at 9:42 PM Beautiful like the no fly zone of my heart. Thank you for a visit into your private side of being. Anne-Lise Andresen August 31, 2016 at 7:49 AM - Thank you Michael, glad you came to visit:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler August 30, 2016 at 9:18 PM I once wrote down my deepest thoughts in a diary, until poetry came into my life, then all of those emotions ended up there instead... I liked this nostalgic, heartfelt poem. Very beautiful, Anne-Lise... If this is for a contest, I wish you the best of luck!! Anne-Lise Andresen August 31, 2016 at 7:53 AM - A good comparison, diary and poems .... much emotion in a poem, Kelly :) - Thank you for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray August 30, 2016 at 4:47 PM We can depend on diaries to keep our deepest secrets Anne-Lise. Good luck. Anne-Lise Andresen August 31, 2016 at 7:51 AM - Yes Jean, faithful :) - Thank you for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich August 30, 2016 at 3:18 PM Interesting word choice and how you showed it. Very nice. Anne-Lise Andresen August 31, 2016 at 7:49 AM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nilima Deb August 30, 2016 at 2:03 PM deep write ! great dear ! Anne-Lise Andresen August 30, 2016 at 2:12 PM - Glad you like it, Nilima :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven August 30, 2016 at 9:47 AM Brilliant write, great form. Anne-Lise Andresen August 30, 2016 at 11:53 AM - Thank you for the lovely visit and comments, Scott :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wendy Rycroft August 29, 2016 at 3:38 PM Good poem, well done, I'v not done the style yet, cannot get my brain, round it x Anne-Lise Andresen August 30, 2016 at 3:50 AM - This form is not easy .... but a challenge to try - Thank you for the lovely visit and comments, Wendy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann August 29, 2016 at 11:57 AM I like the depth of the poem and the deeper depth at the end. Lots of wishes, Kai Anne-Lise Andresen August 30, 2016 at 3:54 AM - Kai,thank you for the lovely visit - lots of wishes, and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus August 29, 2016 at 10:47 AM This is very creative, Anne-Lise, and your choice od theme is quite unique. Superb end line...I'm looking forward to seeing your entry on the winners' list:) Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen August 30, 2016 at 3:53 AM - Win and loss with a smile :) - Thank you for the lovely visit and comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud August 29, 2016 at 10:45 AM i really like the way this was scribed, dear anne.... ohh sweet musings!,, happy days with huggs! Anne-Lise Andresen August 29, 2016 at 1:10 PM - Happy day for you too, Nette :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith August 29, 2016 at 9:10 AM Exceptional write A-L...much enjoyed Anne-Lise Andresen August 29, 2016 at 1:08 PM - Glad you enjoy it, Tim :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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