Deluge Drear

Cushions of mauve piled high 
above a lingering letterbox of light,
slow-shifting shades of darker hue
descend in deepening black upon the sea.
And all around is silent, still,
no birds, no wave-sounds, dried-up winter leaves
now cling as crisp and lifeless remnants
on the trees, mute in breathless air.
The purple backdrop drains to grey,
The fading light retreats and finally gives way.
A slight and almost-friendly breeze
ripples the water, rustles the trees.
A faint and muffled rumbling in the gloom,
a first few raindrops, innocently sparse,
blown in upon a quickening wind.
The clouds converge, their prelude done.
Across the bay is launched a sudden storm,
A tempest from the wild Atlantic borne.
The huddled shoreline dwellings disappear,
engulfed within a winter deluge drear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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August 24, 2019 at 4:58 PM
dwellings disappear... I get that. Here in AZ... the dust consumes the landscape in a storm that threatens your breath. Wonderful write. I really enjoyed it. Ann
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August 25, 2019 at 6:34 AM
Thank you for this comment,Ann. Glad you enjoyed.
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August 24, 2019 at 10:35 AM
Nicely done. Much enjoyed.
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August 25, 2019 at 6:33 AM
Many thanks, Eric.
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February 8, 2019 at 12:59 PM
IT IS A FEAST! I was ever present here waiting for the storm. I am so glad you have found your voice again. Patricia
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February 8, 2019 at 1:38 PM
Thank you so much for this Patricia. Good to be back in touch.
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