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Deluge Drear

Cushions of mauve piled high above a lingering letterbox of light, slow-shifting shades of darker hue descend in deepening black upon the sea. And all around is silent, still, no birds, no wave-sounds, dried-up winter leaves now cling as crisp and lifeless remnants on the trees, mute in breathless air. The purple backdrop drains to grey, The fading light retreats and finally gives way. A slight and almost-friendly breeze ripples the water, rustles the trees. A faint and muffled rumbling in the gloom, a first few raindrops, innocently sparse, blown in upon a quickening wind. The clouds converge, their prelude done. Across the bay is launched a sudden storm, A tempest from the wild Atlantic borne. The huddled shoreline dwellings disappear, engulfed within a winter deluge drear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/24/2019 4:58:00 PM
dwellings disappear... I get that. Here in AZ... the dust consumes the landscape in a storm that threatens your breath. Wonderful write. I really enjoyed it. Ann
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Peter Rees
Date: 8/25/2019 6:34:00 AM
Thank you for this comment,Ann. Glad you enjoyed.
Date: 8/24/2019 10:35:00 AM
Nicely done. Much enjoyed.
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Peter Rees
Date: 8/25/2019 6:33:00 AM
Many thanks, Eric.
Date: 2/8/2019 12:59:00 PM
IT IS A FEAST! I was ever present here waiting for the storm. I am so glad you have found your voice again. Patricia
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/8/2019 1:38:00 PM
Thank you so much for this Patricia. Good to be back in touch.

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