Deluge

Incessant rain,
incessant pain
a primeval fury.
People run like mad.
The river overflows,
there's no escape
but to the highest hill
they go.
Alas there is no shelter there,
and rain falls without break.
Children are now safe.
They splash in mud,
they dive in shallow pools, 
throw water at each other,
laugh, filled with delight.
Soldiers bring food
and at last some tents.
A modicum of shelter
finally arrives.
Still there's incessant rain.
Still children play,
while women, eyes wet, look down
towards the vales
and wonder where
their husbands drowned.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 5/29/2021 7:49:00 AM
So sad, while children play wives look for their husbands. Children don't understand death.
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Date: 5/28/2021 3:24:00 PM
How tragic it is that people have to face horrors like that, it’s so sad. “If children's laughter can be heard in spite of disaster, maybe hope in heavy hearts grows faster.” An excellent write Victor… Belle
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Date: 5/28/2021 11:00:00 AM
i CAN SENSE THE ANXIETY IN THIS WRITE IN THE MOTHERS OF THE CHILDREN AND THE WIVES WHOSE HUSBAND DROWNED AND DIED - VERY SAD BUT THE TEMPO IS EXCELLENT AND DEPICTS THE RAIN FALLING AND THE HOPELESSNESS OF THE SITUATION. WELL PENNED MY FRIEND, HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.
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Date: 5/28/2021 7:02:00 AM
Quite a tragic verse Victor that you often hear about. Tom
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Date: 5/27/2021 3:01:00 PM
Hi Victor, What a well written poem with good imagery. I echo what Judy said. Well done-Alexis
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Date: 5/27/2021 12:33:00 PM
Even in times of intense sadness, there is always hope in the laughter of little children. A finely wrought verse, Victor.
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Date: 5/27/2021 9:04:00 AM
A lot going on here, with a mixture of emotions, and the ending so bleak. Well written, Victor! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/27/2021 8:57:00 AM
This speaks of how though there is despair and poverty and tragedy in the world life goes on. Life will find a way. God Bless my friend, JB
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Date: 5/27/2021 5:20:00 AM
Well written verse, with emotional paradox between sadness and laughter, very nice one.Victor.
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Date: 5/27/2021 4:51:00 AM
You got me with the turn in the end, Victor. Great descriptive write as always.
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Date: 5/27/2021 3:49:00 AM
Oh! This is sad, interspersed with the children's laughter, nice one, Victor:)
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Date: 5/27/2021 2:26:00 AM
Stark contrast of emotions
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