Deliverance

Foreboding luster
Breaching the forest darkness
Emancipation
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
November 27, 2009 at 11:40 AM
Congratulations Cecil, on your success Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” contest with this lovely haiku. (…Sorry to be so late. Don’t they say better late than never? I’m finally reading these winners. xoxoxox) . Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Augustus Avatar
November 26, 2009 at 11:10 AM
I loved how you used the light as being the deliverer of the darkness that was in the picture. I think your poem is filled with actual truth! Well done with this one! I like this. There is no question in my mind that this poem deserved a placement in this contest.
Fraser Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 10:16 AM
Excellent Haiku Cecil > kool title , big congrats on your winning piece in Raul's contest >> James
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November 24, 2009 at 2:54 PM
Cecil, I wanted to stop by and add congratulations on your win in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor! Have a wonderful Thanksgiving. Karen
George   Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 3:49 AM
Very creative and spiritual view of Raul's photo in this wonderful Haiku, Cecil. Congratulations on your win. Love, Lainie
Strand Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 3:47 AM
Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Cecil.Rgds Brian
Brown Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 3:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ascension contest Cecil. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 9:59 PM
Congrats, Cecil, for your winning poem in Raul's contest... well deserved win .. great haiku... blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Moreno Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 9:34 PM
Cecil, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
Brown Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 6:38 AM
Thank you for starting my new day out with some excellent reading Cecil. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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November 18, 2009 at 5:08 PM
Interesting view on the picture for a faith message. The title works well with the last line. Good luck in the contest. Karen
Richards Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 7:56 AM
I love this one! Beautiful entry to the contest, Cecil! ~ Love, Carrie
Gorelick Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 11:40 PM
Very nice..Love the last line. BG
Townsend Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 11:40 PM
Freedom, just as nature and life intended. Your words speak to my soul. Smiles from Lolita
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