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Delightful Times

Delightful Times (Ameri-Sonnet) I love a cozy fireplace always brings such a delight with things that make my heart race in the wonderland of white. Snuggling up in bed at night inside away from the storm, after turning of the light the down blankets keep us warm. No other place brings more calm there is the time full with dreams, Some dreams have a lovely charm but not always what it seems. With special roots that are deep sometimes for joy makes me weep. Erich J.Goller Copyright 11.5.2011 Ameri-Sonnet by Richard W. Jenkins 14 lines--7 syllables each line Rhyming ab-ab-cd-cd-ef-ef-gg-

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Date: 3/22/2012 12:18:00 PM
Hi Erich. Soup mail!
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Date: 3/22/2012 12:15:00 PM
Flows like a sweet melody...love the fireplace view and the feeling of down comforters too...it's a new type of sonnet for me and glad u introduced Jenkin's version of it. I appreciate this a lot! I will write one and send it your way...Gwendolen
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Erich Goller
Date: 3/22/2012 12:54:00 PM
thank you very much Gwendolen. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and form..Hugs!Erich
Date: 3/22/2012 1:23:00 AM
A wonderful poem, Erich, and I love the form! I always love reading your poetry and you inspire me to try new forms. Perhaps, I will try an ameri-sonnet...whatever happened with the pictures? Did you try it?
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Date: 3/22/2012 10:29:00 AM
thank you very much Rhonda,I'm glad you liked the poem and form. About the pictures I cant to seem it to work. Hugs!Erich
Date: 3/21/2012 9:19:00 PM
wonderland of white... enchanting! your last lines is the coup, Erich... simply moving... good luck on the contest and thank you for stopping by and your kind comments
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Erich Goller
Date: 3/21/2012 9:50:00 PM
thank you very much Mia.I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.Hugs!Erich
Date: 3/21/2012 1:49:00 PM
Love cozy,warm fireplace to....just sit there and dream....romantic.....but it is"not always what it seems",love it Erich.
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Erich Goller
Date: 3/21/2012 2:30:00 PM
Thank you very much Anne Lise.,mostly a dream it is,Hugs!Erich

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