Delightful Dynamos

Delightful diners flutter near,
                        creating quite an atmosphere.
			Their tiny beating wings I hear.
			They lunch a bit, then swiftly veer
			to left or right. They bring such cheer.
			Wee hummingbirds--they have no peer.
			
			I had in mind to lure these guests
			by planting flowers they love best.
			I have succeeded in my quest. 
			Now by their presence I am blessed,
			but soon, to leave some will be pressed,
			for they have hatchlings in their nests.






posted September 13, 2016

entered in Brian Strand's End July Premiere Contest on July 26, 2017

April 1, 2018, entered in Deborah Guenther Beachboard's
It's a Shorty Contest       Received Honorable Mention

February 13, 2019, entered in Mark Toney's Poetry Marathon Mile 18

April 7, 2020
entered in Line Gauthier's 6 Lines of Cheerful Rhyme contest   placed 2nd

February 1, 2023
entered in the A Simple Pleasure Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Date: 2/6/2021 7:22:00 PM
So glad to find this charming poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Janice ~
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Date: 4/18/2020 8:30:00 AM
Great poem and congratulations Janice a beautiful write and a very worthy 2nd win in the contest. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/18/2020 9:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jennifer. Janice
Date: 4/14/2020 8:15:00 PM
Lovely Janice! You really captured the spirit of hummingbirds. They do make me happy. We have two feeders that are drained several times a week! Congratulations on your winning placement!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/14/2020 8:35:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sam! Janice
Date: 4/4/2018 6:47:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Janice. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/4/2018 9:05:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra! Janice
Date: 4/3/2018 9:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this perfect rhyming beauty. I love to watch hummingbirds and you described them so well.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/4/2018 8:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan! Janice
Date: 4/3/2018 8:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Janice, excellent write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/4/2018 8:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve! Janice
Date: 4/3/2018 3:57:00 PM
absolutely delightful monorhyme, i'd love to see them for real one day:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/3/2018 4:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! Janice
Date: 4/3/2018 3:37:00 PM
Delightful poem. Congrats on your win, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/3/2018 4:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line! Janice
Date: 4/3/2018 2:30:00 PM
Tickling this bird fanciers fancy with this one! A wonderful poem Janice, sublime. Congratulations! xomo :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/3/2018 4:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen! Janice
Date: 4/3/2018 2:02:00 PM
Who doesn't love a hummingbird? I must remember to set out my feeders soon.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/3/2018 4:01:00 PM
Thank you so much for the honorable mention, Deborah! Janice
Date: 7/28/2017 9:25:00 PM
This is so charming and sweet, and I adore hummers ... congrats on your win, Janice! :-)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/3/2018 4:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Greg! Janice
Date: 7/28/2017 7:48:00 PM
Hi Janice, a great salute to the hummers! I love them too and I keep the feeders bright and sweet for them. Congrats on your win, delightfully done! :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/28/2017 8:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan! Janice
Date: 9/15/2016 3:40:00 PM
Sweet!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/15/2016 4:06:00 PM
Thanks, Kim! Janice
Date: 9/15/2016 9:53:00 AM
Very beautiful Janice,congrats!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/15/2016 4:07:00 PM
Thanks, Sara! Janice
Date: 9/15/2016 1:16:00 AM
Lovely poem...Congratulations on your well deserved Win...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/15/2016 7:58:00 AM
Thanks so much, Supraja. Janice
Date: 9/14/2016 11:18:00 PM
Beautifully done, Janice... Congratulations! ...Fran
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/15/2016 8:01:00 AM
Thanks so much, Fran. Janice
Date: 9/14/2016 1:35:00 PM
Beautiful write Janice...Congrats on your win
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/14/2016 4:20:00 PM
Thanks so much, Joseph! Janice
Date: 9/14/2016 12:05:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Janice. Love the unobtrusive monorhyme.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/14/2016 12:08:00 PM
Thanks so much, Agnes! Janice
Date: 9/14/2016 10:14:00 AM
Such a delightful poem, Janice. Congrats on your win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/15/2016 8:02:00 AM
Thank you, Afzal! Janice
Date: 9/14/2016 10:03:00 AM
Janice, this rings a beautiful tune! congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/15/2016 8:00:00 AM
Thanks so much, Luloo. Janice
Date: 9/14/2016 9:49:00 AM
so lovely to read this again Janice many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/15/2016 8:03:00 AM
Thank you, Jan! Janice
Date: 9/14/2016 9:17:00 AM
Love this, Janice! I can picture the "wee" hummingbirds right now :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/14/2016 9:34:00 AM
Thanks so much, Laura! Janice
Date: 7/23/2016 9:33:00 PM
I love hummingbirds! I don't see too many, though. A delightful poem, Janice! Congrats on your placement! Blessings!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/23/2016 9:39:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kim! Janice
Date: 7/21/2016 6:44:00 AM
Nice poem, Janice. I love watching them, and your words present their image very well. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/21/2016 8:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sandra. Janice
Date: 7/19/2016 4:10:00 PM
Janice, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/19/2016 7:05:00 PM
Luloo, thank you so much! Janice
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