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Delicious

black petal lips and budding hips with soft sighs she sips a pitcher of wine rose moon kissed locks and dainty socks cups that overflows apple cider eyes and vanilla bean skies a dull ache mulling his deep voice lulling french tipped nails abed rigid sails air brushed smiles and earthly wiles a blackberry haze her integument maze he does explore she does adore

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Casarah Nance

Date: 5/1/2014 7:03:00 AM

Very sexy and flowing like a well rehearsed kiss. Great words girl. well done.

Rob Carter

Date: 3/4/2014 8:16:00 AM

ahh, can picture the scene..a pitcher of rose, she knows how to have a good time. Good description in such short space.

Goode Guy

Date: 3/4/2014 8:12:00 AM

A.E. - a Delicious start to the day, and learned a new word too! (integument). Thanks for the covering. ;-)

Sandip Goswami

Date: 3/4/2014 2:29:00 AM

" He does explore , she does adore ." ...really nice . Best wishes from India .

Paul Callus

Date: 3/2/2014 2:43:00 PM

Beautiful and delicious. // paul

Painted Hunter

Date: 2/27/2014 12:52:00 PM

Good stuff...welcome to the soup!...Caleb

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/27/2014 2:59:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,A.E. - I choose your first nice written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 2/27/2014 2:50:00 AM

I like your free verse style, AE, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT