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Delicate Dimensions

The Shepherd asked the poetess- Who are you? Twinkling her eyes, the poetess said-who am I. Am I a breath or a death; breeze or a storm; am I soothed or havocked? I am blazed and ashed. Am I a flower or a crackling leaf; sand or a sea; rock or a snow? I am a droplet and a wavelet. Am I a mystic sky or a fog; cloud or a smoke; hazed or dazed? I am a dew and blue. Am I a moon or its shadow; real or a fake; peace or a mayhem? I am resting and running. Am I desired or scraped; slapdash or deliberate; gem or a junk? I am nerdish and doltish. O! dear shepherd who cares and wonders who am I? I am a treasure of pleasure, I am a glow and a blow, I am tender and blender, I am your treasured flow. **************

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Date: 3/3/2018 3:20:00 AM
really good! Very deep...
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Shefali Chitre
Date: 3/4/2018 9:56:00 PM
Thank you Avani! Shefali
Date: 3/2/2018 12:15:00 PM
This is a deep and powerful piece that you have penned, my friend! What an enjoyable read! Best regards. Pandita
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Shefali Chitre
Date: 3/2/2018 12:57:00 PM
Thank you Pandita ! Shefali
Date: 2/4/2018 10:34:00 AM
Your last stanza can stand all by itself...Good write...Enjoyed it...All the best to you
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Shefali Chitre
Date: 2/4/2018 11:14:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 2/4/2018 9:00:00 AM
Wonderful! I love it, everything about it, a fave :)
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Shefali Chitre
Date: 2/4/2018 11:14:00 AM
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