Premiere Contest WinnerDelicate Crimson

The blazing heat  e x h a u s t e d 
                                          me mid-autumn...

I never knew love's kindle could 
extinguish into ash from a sagacious death.
You entered my  f r a g m e n t e d  veins, 
searching for a ruby bloodline to remorse.
Forsaken without nourishment-
                             indifferent with lassitude. 

I fear the inertia of my soul has been unseen
and craves devotion with sensitivity unsleeping.  

I have no stars left to count, no scarlet lilies left to pick and in my aching sympathies I find apathetic desires. Mother Nature brought her introvenient shame withering all willows weeping. Abandoned leaves dive…
                             
                                      ...delicate crimson.
 





Original contest, Memories of May Poetry Contest
Contest judged, May 8, 2019

Date written: May 3, 2018 
For the contest, Writing Challenge 4, May 2019, No Placement Poetry Contest
Sponsor, Dear Heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gordon Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 10:15 AM
So much pain in this poem Laura, but very well written and expressed, congrats on your win!
Gauthier Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 10:43 PM
Lovely, congrats on your top win, Laura.
Ashley Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 9:58 PM
Laura, the pain expressed with your poignant pen is rich in imagery and emotional impact and leaves me in awe of your awesome talent. Every line is a poetic beauty.. Congratulations on your well deserved trophy win, my friend! ~Susan
Gentry Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 7:49 PM
Congratulations on your win. An awesome write. Enjoyed.
Hamilton Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 9:37 AM
Great writing Laura, congrats on a fine win!
Haight Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Such an outstanding poem, Laura. Congratulations on your Trophy placement! Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 6:31 AM
ruby bloodlines, apathetic desires... Congrats on top win, Laura!
Mishra Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 6:18 AM
Very nicely written. Congrats on your win!
La France Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Laura, deep and dark, and beautifully written, love your style (ps can you check your soupmail, please)
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 12:54 AM
Divine writing, Laura!! I love the imagery you used in this emotive free verse. Thanks again for my win with Sahara.
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