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Delayed Departures

Deep within his marrow, he knew she would go Her imminent departure a nuance of the seasonal paradigm He poured a drink as he gazed at the falling snow, It was still autumn, yet winter had the temerity to arrive ahead of time He wished her proclivity was to leave in spring To play out this saga when flowers bloom But fate had something else to bring, Barren landscapes and a wintry gloom The aperture of his camera captured the snowy scene As a sort of brokenhearted souvenir At another time its full meaning he might glean His thought were now of winter drawing near He could attest that his hopes began to grow, At least for a while they would not yet part Her departure was delayed by the falling snow Falling gently, and settling on seasons of the heart ~ 10-31-18 Eight Word Challenge-9 Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Date: 12/2/2018 9:21:00 AM
Joseph, I enjoyed reading and great way of the use of the 8 words . perfect pictures. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/28/2018 9:02:00 AM
Back with congratulations :) xomo!
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Date: 11/27/2018 9:48:00 PM
Nice win congrats Joseph on a touching write!
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Joseph May
Date: 11/28/2018 8:55:00 AM
Thank you for my placement John..
Date: 11/27/2018 8:14:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in John's 8-word contest, Joseph - this was not an easy challenge, but very rewarding, I think. Blessings to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season! :-)
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Date: 11/27/2018 7:25:00 PM
"Her departure was delayed by the falling snow." Sometimes in life, we are where we are supposed be. The attitude of: The right time, the right place. There is a reason why the departure was delayed, and only the heart knows why. This is beautiful Joseph. Congratulations on this win. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/2/2018 6:42:00 PM
wow, this is superb writing from you, Joseph . I sure hope I am at last equal to the task you performed when i try my hand at this one.
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Joseph May
Date: 11/2/2018 7:19:00 PM
Thank you for those kind words Andrea...
Date: 10/31/2018 9:06:00 AM
Very well written Joseph. I can feel it. Nice to see the departure was delayed , leaving hopes that all will work out to be a happy ending in time :) Good luck in the contest!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/31/2018 9:38:00 AM
Thank you Heidi..
Date: 10/31/2018 8:59:00 AM
You did this so well! Good luck in the contest.
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Joseph May
Date: 10/31/2018 9:37:00 AM
Thank you Richard
Date: 10/31/2018 8:48:00 AM
Always a good sign when departure is delayed..time changes things. Well written, Joseph..best for a win.
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Joseph May
Date: 10/31/2018 9:37:00 AM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 10/31/2018 7:59:00 AM
Wonderful poem.
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Joseph May
Date: 10/31/2018 8:36:00 AM
Thank you Mo

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