Delayed Departures

Deep within his marrow, he knew she would go
  Her imminent departure a nuance of the seasonal paradigm
 He poured a drink as he gazed at the falling snow,
   It was still autumn, yet winter had the temerity to arrive ahead of time

 He wished her proclivity was to leave in spring
   To play out this saga when flowers bloom
 But fate had something else to bring,
    Barren landscapes and a wintry gloom

 The aperture of his camera captured the snowy scene
   As a sort of brokenhearted souvenir
 At another time its full meaning he might glean
    His thought were now of winter drawing near

 He could attest that his hopes began to grow,
   At least for a while they would not yet part
 Her departure was delayed by the falling snow
   Falling gently, and settling on seasons of the heart
                                  ~
 10-31-18
 Eight Word Challenge-9  Contest
 Sponsor: John Hamilton
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Roper Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 9:21 AM
Joseph, I enjoyed reading and great way of the use of the 8 words . perfect pictures. Congratulations on your win.
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November 28, 2018 at 9:02 AM
Back with congratulations :) xomo!
Hamilton Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 9:48 PM
Nice win congrats Joseph on a touching write!
May Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 8:55 AM
Thank you for my placement John..
Barden Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:14 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in John's 8-word contest, Joseph - this was not an easy challenge, but very rewarding, I think. Blessings to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season! :-)
Nicole Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 7:25 PM
"Her departure was delayed by the falling snow." Sometimes in life, we are where we are supposed be. The attitude of: The right time, the right place. There is a reason why the departure was delayed, and only the heart knows why. This is beautiful Joseph. Congratulations on this win. ~ Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 6:42 PM
wow, this is superb writing from you, Joseph . I sure hope I am at last equal to the task you performed when i try my hand at this one.
May Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 7:19 PM
Thank you for those kind words Andrea...
Sands Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 9:06 AM
Very well written Joseph. I can feel it. Nice to see the departure was delayed , leaving hopes that all will work out to be a happy ending in time :) Good luck in the contest!
May Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 9:38 AM
Thank you Heidi..
Lamoureux Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 8:59 AM
You did this so well! Good luck in the contest.
May Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 9:37 AM
Thank you Richard
Pandit Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 8:48 AM
Always a good sign when departure is delayed..time changes things. Well written, Joseph..best for a win.
May Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 9:37 AM
Thank you Vijay
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 7:59 AM
Wonderful poem.
May Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 8:36 AM
Thank you Mo
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