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defying time seasons rolling over ageless slopes AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on May 28, 2020

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Date: 5/30/2020 11:26:00 PM
Very nice. Love how you used 'rolling.' Thank you, Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/31/2020 10:01:00 AM
Thanks, Gershon.
Date: 5/29/2020 9:42:00 PM
Nice!
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Date: 5/30/2020 2:16:00 PM
Thanks, Kim.
Date: 5/29/2020 9:14:00 PM
So much expressed in so little. Beautiful flow. Best. Mohan
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Date: 5/30/2020 2:16:00 PM
Thank you, Mohan.
Date: 5/29/2020 12:24:00 PM
Very thought-provoking and beautiful in simplicity, Line
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Date: 5/29/2020 4:43:00 PM
Thank you, John ~
Date: 5/29/2020 9:45:00 AM
Simply beautiful Line. Left me with a sign and a yen to wander
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Date: 5/29/2020 11:09:00 AM
Thanks, John. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/29/2020 9:04:00 AM
I studied Ancient Archeology as a sub major in my degree - how I wish I had followed that career. Seasons and ruins will remain although Seasons goes through to the finish line! Lovely description. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/29/2020 11:09:00 AM
How interesting ~ thank you, Jennifer.
Date: 5/29/2020 12:22:00 AM
I can see the seasons changing in the landfield with the barn, good one, Line.
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Date: 5/29/2020 11:09:00 AM
Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/28/2020 10:14:00 PM
lovely haiku and darling photograph - on of yours Line?
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Date: 5/28/2020 10:36:00 PM
Thanks. Not my photo ~ it's a bad habit not to always give credit where credit is due.

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