Defined By Time

Memories mark moments of time, passing like a carousel
  A bitter day in January Challenger exploded
  Hopes for the future of our space program quickly eroded
Recalling the fate of the first teacher in space, on sadness dwell

On a November day in Dallas, nineteen sixty-three
  Camelot dreams collided with bullets, a president died
  Who’ll forget where they were when they heard the news and sadly cried
Benchmarks, dates circled on calendars, time passes as we grieve

Two thousand and one an attack befell New York’s twin towers
  Were you one of many who watched the second tower fall?
  Have you wished to travel back in time and these events forestall?
Cycles of life and death recorded, buds that bloom black flowers

Such are the transcripts documented in every human heart
  Moments in time that change the course of history as we know it
  Reminders of tragic events and acts that mankind commits
In the cyclical sense, they’re but slivers of a vast pie chart 



*Entry for Barbara Gorelick's Enclosed Rhyme "Time Contest"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/20/2010 5:05:00 PM
tragic events can change everyone. we just never know how much. beautiful write Carolyn. hope all is well.and may you have a merry christmas with those most important to you. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 12/11/2010 7:56:00 PM
Carolyn, I knew you had a winner here. You were so explicit with your historical facts and well expressed thoughts on "Moments in time that change the course of history as we know it". Congratulations dear lady, on a well deserved win. Blessings, Joy (Jew)
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Date: 12/10/2010 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 12/9/2010 2:25:00 PM
very profoundly sad write a hard spot for the mind to dwell excellently written as always. Light & Love
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Date: 12/8/2010 12:52:00 PM
Carolyn....very glad and pleased to see you win...... you deserved it ... ...as I said i loved the vivid imagery and felt for the people in the towers as they fell.....very sincerely...... Syd
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Date: 12/8/2010 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your very worthy 2nd Place win in Barb's Contest, Seafaress! Wonderful poem to be kept on on my list. Blessings always! Love, audrey
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Date: 12/7/2010 4:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.Sara
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Date: 12/7/2010 1:20:00 PM
now why doesn't thios surprise me? Congratulations to you Carolyn!
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Date: 12/7/2010 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Barbara Gorelick's "Once Upon A Time" contest. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/7/2010 2:00:00 AM
Car. .a well deserved win. .When it comes to poetry you shine,When it comes to history,you shimmer. .great message here,dear.You must collaborate in a poem with fraser one day,i used to enjoy your history collaborations too.,great work dear friend,Hugs C.C
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Date: 12/6/2010 6:05:00 PM
Well said Carolyn. Wonderful poem and it is true. Our lives are marked by these happenings. Congratulations on your high honor. Love. Joyce
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Date: 12/6/2010 1:29:00 PM
Warm congratulations on your super win in Barb's contest, Seafaress! I knew this would be on the List of winners! Lots of love, Audrey
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Date: 12/5/2010 10:08:00 PM
Congratulations, Carolyn on your success on this contest, very deserving win. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 12/5/2010 9:19:00 PM
What a beautiful portrayal of time Carolyn. many congrats for this win.
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Date: 12/5/2010 11:52:00 AM
Such a introspective poem, Carolyn....history marks the time in ways that nothing else can....those tragic moments when we remember each detail like a photograph, well done, and so true! Congratulations on a well deserved win!....love, Carrie
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Date: 12/5/2010 11:26:00 AM
wonderful poem Carolyn, congrats on your second place win
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Date: 12/5/2010 11:15:00 AM
Dear LNC..a wonderful poem that brought back a lot of memories..congrats on your 2nd place in my contest. BG
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Date: 12/4/2010 9:15:00 AM
HI Carolyn-- I really like your title for this one-- and I think your take on the challenge is really moving-- these moments definitely changed the world as we know it-- and lives will never be the same again-- may we never forget-- thank you btw for dropping by my poems-- really appreciate your insights there and happy to read your comments :) enjoy your weekend & hugs-- nikko :)
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Date: 12/4/2010 5:07:00 AM
yes these are all tragic thoughts to recall and they squeeze the heart every time moment in which they are recalled.....the only saving grace for the heart is they too.. have passed Carolyn, and we cling to hope for the future, n'est ce pas?
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Date: 12/3/2010 8:28:00 PM
A look back in time! Some of thes events are, as you said, "documented in every human heart". Sad times we wishe we could erase or reverse...And they do seem to be cyclical, Carolyn. Another for the Winners' list. Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/1/2010 4:05:00 PM
truth in poem; great work :)
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Date: 12/1/2010 1:24:00 PM
This is great and I hope my poem is some what this good but this is only my first enclosed rhyme and love your wonderful comment.Your friend Teresa
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Date: 12/1/2010 7:43:00 AM
well done write!!
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Date: 12/1/2010 6:21:00 AM
This is a 7+ poem. I loved every line of it. Our entire life is defined by time; time marches on and waits for no man. Thank-you for your comments on my poem "Forest For The Trees" I wish you the best in your writings. Jancarl
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Date: 12/1/2010 4:26:00 AM
We are surely defined by time Carolyn, I really enjoyed this write of yours.. Wishing you all the best for BG's contest.. love Wilma
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