Define Yourself

What is your prison? Is it loneliness, silence or just fear. Do you dare venture from darkness into sunlight? Are you content to lurk in the shadows? You are your own warden. You hold the key to unlock your cell. Don't look for others to create your world. Don't let others define you, define yourself. Start living today and tomorrow will speak for itself. 12/27/18
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December 29, 2018 at 9:37 AM
Hi Wren, I enjoyed this write from to finish. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
Rushing Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 9:52 AM
Thank you Alexis!
Hamilton Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 9:13 AM
Enjoyed this Wren, I think the first time reading you, will not be the last I'm sure. Congrats on a fine win!
Rushing Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 9:51 AM
Thank you John for your comments and thanks for sponsoring the contest! Have a Happy New Year!
Sands Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 4:40 PM
So true! Well written! :)
Rushing Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 5:20 PM
Thank you Heidi!
Onclaud Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 4:09 PM
so right, wren...the only person you will ever live with is yourself; be true and free!... a gem of a write!.. congrats on your recent wins and thanks for dropping by!...huggs
Rushing Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 5:20 PM
Thank you Nette for the kind comments! Have a wonderful evening and a Happy New Year!
La France Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 9:22 AM
Wren, wonderful write, so inspiring and what a great message, I hear you, dear poet, wise words but its all uphill and I am weary, this is definitely a FAV for me ~
Rushing Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 12:47 PM
Thank you Dear Heart for your kindness. Sometimes we find strength we didn't know we had! I hope you have a blessed New Year!
Pandit Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 7:21 AM
I like the message in your poem Wren. We build our own prisons..but as you say, we hold the power to free ourselves. Great ending line.
Rushing Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 7:26 AM
Thank you Vijay and have a blessed day!
Gauthier Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 6:14 AM
Words of wisdom indeed, Wren.
Rushing Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 6:59 AM
Thanks you Line, you are a good friend!
Blown Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 10:02 PM
a strong odour of kafka lol
Rushing Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 7:27 AM
Stan you are too kind.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 9:29 PM
Well done. We are in charge of our destiny. The choices are up to us. We do hold all the keys. Good luck in the contest.
Rushing Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 6:57 AM
Thank you Caren for your kind comments!
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