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Defiance

Defiant stand the distant trees, Their battle colours red and gold, Their enemy the cruel wind, Sends vicious gusts of piercing cold. A row of beech trees form a shield, Their sword-like branches held on high, Their stance is resolute and strong, "Fight to the end", their fearsome cry. Their battle standards tattered now, This conflict lost, defeat is near, The ending never was in doubt, What happens next is all too clear. So rage against these winter storms, Defy the cold, deny the end, Our instinct is survive and fight And never, never bend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/28/2018 12:57:00 PM
I enjoyed your personification and love your take on this Autumn subject. Welcome to PS and I hope will see more of your work. // Barry
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Alison Douglas
Date: 12/2/2018 10:39:00 AM
Dear Barry, thank you so much for your encouraging comments. I really do appreciate the feedback. I do enjoy using techniques such as personification.
Date: 11/21/2018 2:21:00 PM
Beautifully done, and a reminder to me to enjoy my sixty degree day, watching my gorgeous trees stand guard, giving them love as they will protect me on Sunday when the winter storm is proposed to "hit". They are my staunchest army.
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Date: 12/2/2018 10:43:00 AM
Dear Caren, thank you once again for your encouraging comments. It is cold and dark here and we have had quite a few stormy days so I do envy you your sixty degree day! Hope the storm wasn't too bad.

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