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Defective Device

Why would you cross the line Why wouldn't you take your time Take a look at this stick Turning around your heels Soon it will make its prick Right deep inside your skin Swiftly... Oh, but slowly. It should hurt you badly We're falling to the pith now Together, let's hit the ground. Now we're scattered cause we're broken No more chances, our hearts' open I am done You are gone But bottomline, It's a good fight We're the only thing we made right Have we lost? Have we lost? Point me just beside you I wanna stay with you Cause I should've told you It's leading me to you Though my hands can't reach you Why, I adore you... I brought my bones discord For when I said the words- And plead for your attention, I've lost the right direction.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/17/2024 7:36:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/23/2016 12:28:00 PM
Nice to see this one again Luci. LINDA
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Date: 1/18/2016 8:40:00 PM
Luci, wow, that is a deep poem to share... Enjoyed. LINDA
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Luci Lynd
Date: 1/19/2016 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Linda :)
Date: 1/18/2016 2:09:00 PM
where we go is up to us....who accompanies if a question of trust....is it one we Love or one we lust....whichever one, opening the heart is a must....very intriguing write luci....;)
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Luci Lynd
Date: 1/18/2016 2:17:00 PM
Thank you Eric. I admire the way you comprehend my poetry. I hope to learn a lot from you, and also from all the poets publishing in this site. :)

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