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Deeply Darkened

Deeply Darkened Deeply darkened, yet slightly lit, Was the route I took, while the moonlight gleamed. It carved a direction of glittered flares, As I danced and murmured a hint of mystique. I was not human, nor kindred soul, But just a mere shadow of all the hearts gone wrong. I was not myself for who would I be? For to be a symbol of something, I must be it all! No blooming flowers or glimmering sun, Just obscurity of vision for my heart to feel low. For I could have done no right or no wrong, From step to step, no morality did I own. It’s nights like those that I felt so at home, For the emptiness of sorrow doesn’t sit still. It flies with the wind and waivers above, Looking for deeply darkened pathways to let out its yearning howl. 30 July 2018

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Date: 8/8/2018 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Francesca Pappadogiannis
Date: 8/8/2018 9:55:00 AM
Thank you very much, Susan. :)
Date: 8/5/2018 4:21:00 PM
Wow....chills with this superb beauty Francesca! Congratulations on your top win! : )
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Francesca Pappadogiannis
Date: 8/5/2018 11:25:00 PM
Thank you very much Connie.
Date: 8/5/2018 12:44:00 PM
Wow! Thrilling read! Ethereal. Enjoyed :)) Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Francesca Pappadogiannis
Date: 8/5/2018 11:26:00 PM
Thank you kindly Maureen
Date: 8/5/2018 11:02:00 AM
"a mere shadow of all the hearts gone wrong"...wow that was one amazing line that caught my eye. great poem...Thank you for your participation and congratulations on your top placement. :)-luloo
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Francesca Pappadogiannis
Date: 8/5/2018 11:29:00 PM
Thank you very much, Laura

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