Notes About The Poem

deeply abstracted

What feeds a writer’s art?
Why feed a writer’s art
when the appetite’s clearly insatiable?

I think in stiches, rows, paragraphs and stanzas,
and I’m not one to undershoot a thesis.
I can’t seem to just write a paper for school,
I have to craft some kind of narrative
- it’s practically involuntary.

Last week was ‘All Saints’ school break. It was a week in France that, like fall, shifted the temperature - cooling the pace, so Peter (my bf) and I could take a breath and metabolize the changes of the past few weeks, where we both moved to Paris - changing schools and jobs. We’ve had big feelings - it was a lot.

Peter’s content with my tireless run on the hamster wheel of education - he has a PhD, so he understands the grind and my often prickly, acerbic and deeply abstracted school-day moods.

He’s on a steep learning curve himself, these days, living suddenly in an all-French world, where every sign and menu is semi-unreadable. We’re working on it - we’ll get there because his tutor gives excellent rewards for effort.
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Songs for this:
Take On Me by Josh Whitehouse
Poor Boy - Nick Drake
Window - Still Woozy
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*For instance , I’ll find myself trying to form a narrative, in response to a clinical case scenario, meant to demonstrate my diagnostic reasoning.
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Theraven Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 7:15 PM
Salut Anai ça va Bof, vous savez, c'est une période de renouveau, alors... -R
Vionet Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 3:04 PM
Holidays (school breaks) are definitely all about renewal - a time to put the books away and live a little. What are you up to these days?
Conn Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 5:58 PM
=] THIS snap shot, ladies and gentlemen, boys and girls, is the very definition of a secret French kiss.
Conn Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 11:51 PM
That was a trick question. It’s all neurosis.
Vionet Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 3:08 PM
That's going to be confusing (all of those Peters). I'd say photo editing is definitely like cosmetic seduction.
Conn Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 8:19 PM
Is photoshop a symptom of neurosis or a cosmetic seduction? Oh and by the way, 4 billion people, TODAY, legally changed their name to Peter.
Vionet Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 6:48 PM
A friend looked at my poetry posts and she said, about the pix, "you never smile." Ok, so expect a lot more smiley pics. *shrug*
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