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Deepest Darkest Depression

In the deepest darkest depression, a void where stars expire, A mind adrift in cosmic gloom, no orbit to aspire. No comet’s blaze, no planet’s course, no light to guide the way, A nebula of shattered thoughts, where hope has bled to gray.

Within this skull, a black hole reigns, where memories collapse, Each fleeting dream, a dying sun, snared in despair’s cold clasp. No galaxy to cradle life, no spark to warm the night, The heart, a derelict moon, spins in eternal blight.

What path, what purpose, what faint star could steer this barren drift? The cosmos leers, a hollow vault, its spheres no longer lift. No warmth, no tide, no radiant dawn to pierce this stellar grave, A universe of ash and dust, where only shadows rave.

And lo, the end, a singularity, with icy tendrils near, Doth whisper low, a final pull, to vanish in its sphere. To merge with naught, to cease, to fade, in dark oblivion’s maw, No fight remains, no will endures, no dread to cling or gnaw.

Yet still I linger, bound to flesh, in this celestial tomb, A specter lost in starless depths, where only anguish looms. The deepest darkest depression grips, a cosmos cold and vast, My soul, a wraith in lifeless voids, forever doomed to last.
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Lawess Avatar
February 22, 2026 at 1:14 AM
This was so raw and absolutely touching. I recently created a new account on here but would love you in out on a poem called “depression” I wrote in 2010. I was 15 ant the time which only was a different stage of life, however After reading this I’d respect your opinion tremendously. If you can find my proofs account Briyanna Lawes , Depression should be listed. Amazing work
Lawess Avatar
February 24, 2026 at 9:46 AM
I would love that! I had it on my previous account on here from years ago. It’s called Depression by Briyanna Lawes on here. It’s not on my current profile, but an old one. If you can’t find it I’d love permission to email it to you for feedback!
Hawksley Avatar
February 23, 2026 at 9:05 PM
I wish I could find it so I could experience what you wrote. I love all forms of literature, and poetry is my favorite, especially when young people take an interest like you. Don't hesitate to send me a link to the poem.
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