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Deep Purple (Part 1)

Gray, metallic spheres Chasing me up to the edge Jumped into the sea

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Jay Loveless

Date: 10/19/2009 10:50:00 AM

brilliant imagry, beautiful xoxo Raiin

L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/5/2009 12:43:00 PM

Cesar, the starkness reminds me of the symbolists experiment in minimalist sufficiency ... you have excelled in this tedious art. One love, my friend.

James Fraser

Date: 6/3/2009 3:34:00 PM

Kool write Cesar, i had visions of lyrics from Deep Purple in Haiku form here, great write>James

Date: 5/30/2009 2:03:00 PM

Good use of imagery. I like how you use short forms with impact. Nice use of action. Thank you for your kind words on my poetry. Karen

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/23/2009 10:01:00 AM

Hopefully you're a great swimmer. I like the excitement of the chase and escape. Great job! ~Joseph

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/17/2009 7:00:00 PM

This is deep brother! Jeremiah