Deep Is the Well (Unrhymed Sonnet)

Silver on glass, it interests me not
That you can make judgments on images
I care nothing about recognition
Neither do rank nor hierarchy move me

Do you think you reflect deeper than I?
When she looks at you, what do you show her?
Does she see, in you, her own true feelings
Or just the face that you want her to see?

Me? I see something that's quite different
I see beyond her skin and through her smile
I see her yearning heart and cries within
I see ties that bind and those that fetter

Her real beauty I see (clearest of all)
I see she in whom I truly believe ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Gass Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 6:23 AM
This is lovely in its form and sentiment. Physical beauty fades but inner beauty endures and is much better than an empty shell. As always, a wonderful write. Thank you for your condolences. We had Boo for almost 18 years and she was a good kitty. Love Robin
Williams Avatar
November 17, 2008 at 1:37 PM
Hello Nigel... strong steadfast wording all the way through, wonderful writing, no one could wave the affirmation made here.... BRAVO !
Campbell Avatar
November 16, 2008 at 12:00 PM
This is very beautiful. Thank you for the kind comments on my poems, I will get some more up soon. I still feel very amateur with my poetry, I feel like I have a lot to learn. Thanks again for your kind words, you inspire me to write more. - Zoe
White Avatar
November 15, 2008 at 8:00 PM
a mirrored image is the view that we sometimes choose to ignore, very interesting and thought-provoking write, take care D-ncye
Gorelick Avatar
November 15, 2008 at 6:49 PM
You are a treasure..this is just beautiful. I think you do see...clearly. BG
Torres Avatar
November 15, 2008 at 3:26 PM
Nigel Spendid. What a beautiful write. Loved it very much. Michael Torres
Begum Avatar
November 15, 2008 at 2:17 PM
the last line is very movingg, seems very personal beautiful poem x sharmin
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace