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Deep inside my soul there is a hunger that only true calm can soothe and as I link to tranquil moments, the evening bathes my tired face effacing it from noise of day, the mind is free to find its groove Twinned onto the night and all her peaceful escapades, I retrace my steps, and return once again to evening skies and lofty sacred space Serene as the swans that glide in the silent river Safe in the knowledge that they are seldom seen Something beautiful holds still for them and me Deep inside my soul there is a longing to repose in mollified appease, to allay my worries for a while and reconcile with the quiet breeze Contest Name: Writing Prompt- Calm Sponsor Name: Constance La France May 9, 2021 Words used: Calm, tranquil, peaceful, still, quiet, serene

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Date: 5/25/2021 4:11:00 AM
Mystic, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Calm-Challenge with your wonderful poem and image, love _Constance
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Date: 5/11/2021 8:22:00 PM
Very soothing Mystic! Reading this poem, you take me to a serene path all alone under the moonlight..
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Date: 5/10/2021 4:54:00 AM
Your poem reigns tranquility, just like the lovely scene you posted. Serene is the word for this silent beauty. All the best, Vienna.
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Date: 5/10/2021 1:46:00 AM
There is a deep calm in your poem. Bet it will rate high.
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Date: 5/9/2021 3:38:00 PM
Beautiful piece of writing, Mystic Rose Rose. I think Constance will recognize the amount of work that went into this. Nice job!
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Date: 5/9/2021 3:52:00 PM
I sure hope so dear Milton. Thank you for stopping by. Hugs
Date: 5/9/2021 3:20:00 PM
Wow, Rose. You do free verse so well. This is exceptional. A pleasure to read.
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Date: 5/9/2021 3:30:00 PM
Thank you Daniel, I hope she is please with it. Have a blessed evening :)