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Deep In the Forest

 
Golden soft was the light that swiftly flew, As whistling rain pelted majestic oaks And the soaked birds began to cry for you As Nature silently wrapped up its cloaks. Thirsty for coming dawn, so bold and new. Silver Maples fluttering in the wind, Where the fast sleeping rabbits hid away All beautiful, we wish to never end With brightened colors, every joyful day. As natures beauty flows out to transcend. And a thousand birds are chirping, Deep in the forest a cold pond sparkles On a steep rugged cliff are trees hanging They once had been mighty Sugar Maples. Decay has a beauty that stills the soul Sweet meadows of wildflowers sway and dance, A rainbow of colors under the sun All beautiful, and rabbits hop and prance And here comes fox, oh little rabbit run. Life and death are all part of natures way. _______________________ Rhyme Collaboration - Robert Lindley and Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Inman Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 9:09 AM
Wonderful collaboration to both you and Robert, BW. Lovely poem and smooth flow.
La France Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 3:02 PM
James, thank you, it was such a pleasure writing with Robert, he is one talented writer ~
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December 2, 2015 at 5:19 PM
Beautiful poem read from you my lovely friend. A great philosophy presented with life's changes to death. 7 sure. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
La France Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 9:06 PM
BL, thanks so much for visiting and for the lovely comment and the 7!
Y. Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 4:38 PM
BW, you and Robert have penned a good collab. Great job:-) Alexis 7
La France Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 9:06 PM
Alexis, thanks so much for visiting and the 7, appreciate ~
Callus Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 1:15 PM
A lovely collaboration in which imagery plays an important role. Well done Robert and Constance! #7 All the best. // paul
La France Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 2:36 PM
Thanks so much Paul for that lovely 7, appreciate, it is fun to write with another poet ~
Guzzi Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 7:40 PM
Ahhh always the fox after the rabbit! A lively enjoyable romp Constance! Light & love
La France Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 12:33 PM
Debbie, thank you for visiting, always a pleasure
Martin Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 6:41 PM
Beautiful!! Loved your imagery!
La France Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 12:35 PM
Thanks Thomas , I am the last two stamzas
Boddie Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 5:22 PM
at just a simple gaze....you never cease to amaze....inspiring my pen to blaze....the spark of desire, my mind is dazed....2 thumbs and big toes up bw....lol
La France Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Thanks so much Eric, I am the last 2 verses
Boddie Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 5:24 PM
just noticed it was a collab with mr lindley....kudos to him and his Divine pen as well....
Posting Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 1:42 PM
Wonderful. Wonder full. Beauty full Beautiful!
La France Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 2:08 PM
Thank you Falling for that nice comment
Scars Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 10:27 AM
So amazing and the flow can't be any better. You are so talented..-lu *smiles*
La France Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 2:09 PM
Thanks Laura
Lamoureux Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 9:13 AM
There is wisdom in this piece. Well expressed Constance.
La France Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 2:09 PM
Thank you Richard
Lindley Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 8:14 AM
BW my friend, a truly great pleasure working with you and your verses made this piece quite beautiful!! My next offering will be romantic themed.
Lindley Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 9:53 AM
Great! May post the offer by mid-week. Simply need rest now.
La France Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 8:47 AM
Thank you so much for considering me for this challenge, I truly enjoy writing with you and count me in for the romantic theme offering ~
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November 30, 2015 at 3:57 AM
- Beautiful by U 2 !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 8:49 AM
Anne-Lise, thanks for the beautiful and the hugs ~
Lindley Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 8:10 AM
Yes, BW made it beautiful with her concluding verses, credit on his fine piece goes to her.
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