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Deep Dreams

deep beneath the ivory dome pools of bending colors show lashing out into the air all around have stopped to stare paint their faces to the sky weaving out an endless lie dripping down to blind their sight weave them all into the night the hazy fog obscures the view all colors seem to start anew.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/3/2012 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Michael's "Deep Dreams" contest Christopher. I am sorry this is late. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/24/2012 11:32:00 AM
Wonderful write. And I see from others congratulatory remarks that is was a winner. I can see why.
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Date: 11/23/2012 6:06:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 11/23/2012 5:56:00 PM
Christopher, congratulations!;-) With your "deep dream" win in Michael's awesome contest. Good night~PD
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Date: 11/23/2012 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations! I especially love the fourth couplet. Great job!
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Date: 11/23/2012 6:10:00 AM
Congrad's on Your Win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/23/2012 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations Christopher xx
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Date: 11/23/2012 5:47:00 AM
Congrats my friend on your win my Deep Dream contest... Michael
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Date: 11/23/2012 5:46:00 AM
congratulations Christopher...Seren
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