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hermit-crab

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Divin' Deep down there's guttural gurgles and burbles Jivin' in the respirator. I dive deeper, still deeper than I've ever been before. The seabed is littered with littoral lie-there's just layin' about, praying to be picked up by some swim-on-buy kid like me. It's a jalopy junk yard down there. Old shells long discarded by hermit crabs looking for joyrides in new digs and sporty convertible squats in RV's. Shells discarded are great do-uppers for crabs putting on weight. No one is homeless down here, for all shells discarded, are reborn to after-lives decreed indeed by need in Davy Jones' Locker.

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Date: 7/9/2021 3:07:00 PM
Wonderful write. Enjoyed. God bless you Love, Gina
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Date: 7/9/2021 3:10:00 PM
bit of fun to herald my word play Contest. Cheers,

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