Mike Gentile Poet Free verse

Deep Abiding Love

Give to me, your deep abiding love
Love in every color
Boundless
The reds of fiery passion
                The whites of innocence
The pinks of affection
                      The blues of serenity 

Take from me, my deep abiding love
Love in every sense
Limitless
The stroke of my caress
             The words of my devotion
The gaze of my surrender
                  The taste of tender kiss

Share with me, this deep abiding love
                    Forever

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Darlene De Beaulieu December 9, 2018 at 12:02 PM Hello Mike, this is a free verse, but to me it reads as romantic. I like this poem. have a nice day my friend. Mike Gentile December 9, 2018 at 12:25 PM Thanks so much Darlene xxoo

Robertina B. December 6, 2018 at 11:00 AM Absolutely Beautiful, my friend.. So inspiring and moving.. Really enjoyed your exquisite gem.. Blessings to you!! Mike Gentile December 6, 2018 at 11:20 AM Thank you so much Robertina xxoo

CayCay Godwin November 17, 2018 at 6:54 AM Beautiful lines. Someone once left me the comment, 'these could be wedding vows' and since that wasn't my intent, I didn't at the time realize it was a compliment. Just now, reading you, my thought was, 'beautiful enough for a true wedding of true love truly marrying as a true two, know what I mean? Hope so because its a compliment delivered before a full cup of coffee and really was most glowing. Just not me, yet. All the best ... CayCay Mike Gentile November 17, 2018 at 7:35 AM That is so sweet CayCay and the thought you think that my words are so worthy is quite a compliment, Thanks so much xxoo

Arturo Michael November 13, 2018 at 12:32 PM A whole lot of love fill this poem...All the best Mike Mike Gentile November 13, 2018 at 1:22 PM Thanks Arturo, Best to you as well !!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2018 at 1:04 AM - As the whole rainbow ... this love shines, Mike :) - Lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Mike Gentile November 12, 2018 at 5:31 AM Thank you so much Anne-Lise xxoo

Tom Cunningham November 9, 2018 at 4:18 PM A colourful romantic verse Mike. Without love we have nothing. Tom. Mike Gentile November 9, 2018 at 6:38 PM Thank you Tom!!

Jan Allison November 9, 2018 at 4:09 PM You've portrayed so many emotions in a spectrum of colours with this romantic gem mike:-) Hugs Jan xx Mike Gentile November 9, 2018 at 6:38 PM Thank you so much Jan xxoo

Carolyn Devonshire November 9, 2018 at 12:14 PM Very nice the way you use the colors in the first part of the poem to relate to feelings so appropriately -- white for innocence, blue for serenity, etc. And then in the next portion, you accomplish the same through the use of senses. An excellent write, Mike! Mike Gentile November 9, 2018 at 1:35 PM Thank you so much Carolyn, That is what I was hoping would come across, I am so glad that it resonated with you. Happy Friday xxoo

Vijay Pandit November 9, 2018 at 11:31 AM WOW! This is so charming Mike...the give and take of splendid emotions..in reds, pinks, blues and... caress, gaze, and kisses..love is happy as ever..excellent write.. another one to top the chart of best poems. Mike Gentile November 9, 2018 at 11:38 AM Hi Vijay, coming from you, that is really a compliment, thank you so much !!

Heidi Sands November 9, 2018 at 10:31 AM This is beautiful and so meaningful. Well done Mike. I love it :) Mike Gentile November 9, 2018 at 11:37 AM Thank you Heidi, I am so glad , that makes me happy xxoo