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Deep Abiding Love

Give to me, your deep abiding love Love in every color Boundless The reds of fiery passion The whites of innocence The pinks of affection The blues of serenity Take from me, my deep abiding love Love in every sense Limitless The stroke of my caress The words of my devotion The gaze of my surrender The taste of tender kiss Share with me, this deep abiding love Forever

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/9/2018 12:02:00 PM

Hello Mike, this is a free verse, but to me it reads as romantic. I like this poem. have a nice day my friend.

Mike Gentile
Date: 12/9/2018 12:25:00 PM

Thanks so much Darlene xxoo

Robertina B.

Date: 12/6/2018 11:00:00 AM

Absolutely Beautiful, my friend.. So inspiring and moving.. Really enjoyed your exquisite gem.. Blessings to you!!

Mike Gentile
Date: 12/6/2018 11:20:00 AM

Thank you so much Robertina xxoo

Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/17/2018 6:54:00 AM

Beautiful lines. Someone once left me the comment, 'these could be wedding vows' and since that wasn't my intent, I didn't at the time realize it was a compliment. Just now, reading you, my thought was, 'beautiful enough for a true wedding of true love truly marrying as a true two, know what I mean? Hope so because its a compliment delivered before a full cup of coffee and really was most glowing. Just not me, yet. All the best ... CayCay

Mike Gentile
Date: 11/17/2018 7:35:00 AM

That is so sweet CayCay and the thought you think that my words are so worthy is quite a compliment, Thanks so much xxoo

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/13/2018 12:32:00 PM

A whole lot of love fill this poem...All the best Mike

Mike Gentile
Date: 11/13/2018 1:22:00 PM

Thanks Arturo, Best to you as well !!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/12/2018 1:04:00 AM

- As the whole rainbow ... this love shines, Mike :) - Lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 11/12/2018 5:31:00 AM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise xxoo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/9/2018 4:18:00 PM

A colourful romantic verse Mike. Without love we have nothing. Tom.

Mike Gentile
Date: 11/9/2018 6:38:00 PM

Thank you Tom!!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2018 4:09:00 PM

You've portrayed so many emotions in a spectrum of colours with this romantic gem mike:-) Hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile
Date: 11/9/2018 6:38:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan xxoo

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/9/2018 12:14:00 PM

Very nice the way you use the colors in the first part of the poem to relate to feelings so appropriately -- white for innocence, blue for serenity, etc. And then in the next portion, you accomplish the same through the use of senses. An excellent write, Mike!

Mike Gentile
Date: 11/9/2018 1:35:00 PM

Thank you so much Carolyn, That is what I was hoping would come across, I am so glad that it resonated with you. Happy Friday xxoo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/9/2018 11:31:00 AM

WOW! This is so charming Mike...the give and take of splendid emotions..in reds, pinks, blues and... caress, gaze, and kisses..love is happy as ever..excellent write.. another one to top the chart of best poems.

Mike Gentile
Date: 11/9/2018 11:38:00 AM

Hi Vijay, coming from you, that is really a compliment, thank you so much !!

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/9/2018 10:31:00 AM

This is beautiful and so meaningful. Well done Mike. I love it :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 11/9/2018 11:37:00 AM

Thank you Heidi, I am so glad , that makes me happy xxoo