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Deep-Dark-Hollowed Heart

I stand I wait I worried for the things that may not happened I hope I pray I cried longing for a peaceful heart All I wanted is... when i close my eyes I won't feel afraid and when I open my eyes, a smile will appear coz today i breathe again in a deep-dark-hollowed heart like living as a sinner like walking around in a forest finding a way out God, released me from this feeling... Nobody wants to feel alone like a stranger in a crowded place take me to a home where love can hold me to a nice sleep when the night comes I am lost so find me I cry so hug me I am lonely so love me...

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/12/2024 12:57:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2016 11:58:00 AM

Mony, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2015 10:13:00 PM

Mony, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing. Luv ~SKAT~

Peter Dorr

Date: 7/14/2013 8:30:00 AM

Moving! No amount of wealth, influence or power can compensate for love. All the best, Peter 14/7/13

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/11/2012 11:43:00 AM

"All you need is love,love....." - Touching poem Mony. - oxox Big hug from Anne-Lise

Mony Reyna
Date: 9/25/2012 7:33:00 AM

right... everything needs love. thanx for your comment

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/3/2011 9:06:00 AM

I believe that this is even deeper sadness than the poem even indicates..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn...Many homes are not a safe place for the children or the wife..I hope that this is not your life..Sara

Mony Reyna
Date: 10/3/2011 9:49:00 AM

well, i write this not because of any fear of someone but fear for not achieving.. i won't say i fear for life but there are problems in my life i need to solve. a nice home for me is more like a dream i need to fulfill. so thanx so much for reading my poem. i always like to write poems but i gotta know that English is my second language. so your comments is valuable for me.

Steven Cooke

Date: 8/8/2011 10:30:00 AM

a sad poem, with a charming finish i like this good poetry

Mony Reyna
Date: 10/3/2011 9:50:00 AM

thank youuuuu....