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Deep-Dark-Hollowed Heart

I stand I wait I worried for the things that may not happened I hope I pray I cried longing for a peaceful heart All I wanted is... when i close my eyes I won't feel afraid and when I open my eyes, a smile will appear coz today i breathe again in a deep-dark-hollowed heart like living as a sinner like walking around in a forest finding a way out God, released me from this feeling... Nobody wants to feel alone like a stranger in a crowded place take me to a home where love can hold me to a nice sleep when the night comes I am lost so find me I cry so hug me I am lonely so love me...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/18/2016 11:58:00 AM
Mony, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/5/2015 10:13:00 PM
Mony, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing. Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/14/2013 8:30:00 AM
Moving! No amount of wealth, influence or power can compensate for love. All the best, Peter 14/7/13
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Date: 1/11/2012 11:43:00 AM
"All you need is love,love....." - Touching poem Mony. - oxox Big hug from Anne-Lise
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Mony Reyna
Date: 9/25/2012 7:33:00 AM
right... everything needs love. thanx for your comment
Date: 10/3/2011 9:06:00 AM
I believe that this is even deeper sadness than the poem even indicates..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn...Many homes are not a safe place for the children or the wife..I hope that this is not your life..Sara
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Mony Reyna
Date: 10/3/2011 9:49:00 AM
well, i write this not because of any fear of someone but fear for not achieving.. i won't say i fear for life but there are problems in my life i need to solve. a nice home for me is more like a dream i need to fulfill. so thanx so much for reading my poem. i always like to write poems but i gotta know that English is my second language. so your comments is valuable for me.
Date: 8/8/2011 10:30:00 AM
a sad poem, with a charming finish i like this good poetry
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Mony Reyna
Date: 10/3/2011 9:50:00 AM
thank youuuuu....

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