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Deena and Dale- Love Letter

My Dearest Dale, I the cutest dog in the world , loves a goat You are the apple of my eye and soul mate Who knew we would end so soon, don't gloat It was all because I got stuck in a pail, was it fate? Nevertheless I want to give you and me another try No one gets me like you, I want us to be forever Please whatever you do, please don't ask why I don't want to live my life without you in it, no never I know you are in complete shock, I understand I said some not so nice words to you, I was mad But before the pail incident our life was quite grand If you don’t give us another shot I would be very sad Yours truly , Deena Inspired by the “Love Letter” contest 10-30-17 Inspiration also came from my limerick Deena And Dale Have you heard about this old tale About a dog Deena and a goat Dale What a unique pair Love was in the air Until Dena the dog got stuck in pail

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Date: 11/2/2017 7:27:00 PM
Oh, I think I saw their story at youtube or something similar to it while I was researching for this contest. I chose a different animal pair, thankfully different from yours and I better get started on it. This is NEATO. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 11/2/2017 11:20:00 AM
With this lovely love letter poem, Alexis, I finally get the limerick poem. This is a cool write. Me like it, me like it a lot. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 10/31/2017 4:44:00 AM
Nice job Alexis! My best to you, chuck
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Date: 10/30/2017 7:51:00 PM
what a brilliant idea to write a poem based on one of your poems Alexis - a great fun write, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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