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Deeds Good and Bad

DEEDS GOOD AND BAD I will concede That a friend in need Is a friend indeed Cos he does a man a good deed Some men are harried When we wish to get married We shouldn’t be worried Too soon we’ll be buried Englishmen are always too tea-d USA guys are often coffee-d Such drinks for a man - a good deed But too much and he’s expiry-d And I have also read Of people using lead To bash some man’s head A bad deed instead. ……………………………………………………………………………… ( Monorhyme, but reversed rhyme in last stanza )

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Date: 12/30/2010 10:53:00 AM
lol. marvelous! looking forward to reading more of your work
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Date: 12/30/2010 8:07:00 AM
VERY cute and witty, Sydney! Surely this will be a winner. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/28/2010 3:03:00 PM
You are always superb in the rhymes that comes quite natural to you keeping the humor and wit intact, Sydney
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