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Dee Wore a Bikini

Dee wore a teeny weeny bikini All guys on the beach whistled her keenly She caused hullabaloo As it was a see-through And green-eyed gals swore at Dee obscenely.

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Robert Schatz

Date: 9/21/2023 1:34:00 AM

Oh my God! I'm a fan and a follower Belle...

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/21/2023 2:08:00 AM

Wow! Thank you Robert. I love Limerick’s though the inspiration only comes now and then… Belle

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/21/2023 10:29:00 AM

Oh my! Cute Belle! Congratulations! :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/21/2023 2:06:00 AM

Thank you Linda, appreciated… Belle

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/18/2023 1:46:00 PM

Belle, a great bawdy one, congratulations on your winning placement!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/21/2023 2:06:00 AM

Thank you very much Tania, I enjoyed taking part in your contest… Belle

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2023 1:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your fun Limerick win. Guess she needs a cover up. Have a great day/weekend.............

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/21/2023 2:05:00 AM

Thank you Paula, enjoy all of your days and keep writing… Belle

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2023 12:01:00 PM

she might as well have used her birthday suit . Cute one.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/21/2023 2:04:00 AM

So she have done so. Thanks Andrea… Belle

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/4/2023 2:01:00 AM

Whoa!! The daring of that girl. I wonder how she feels about it today. Thanks for sharing the humor and dropping by my page. Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/4/2023 4:20:00 AM

Probably proud that she had a figure worth showing off. Thank you Sara… Belle

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 8/2/2023 11:52:00 PM

A funny poem. Well done.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/4/2023 12:14:00 AM

Thank you Jeanette, very much. Belle

Jan Allison

Date: 8/2/2023 4:03:00 PM

hahahah sooooo funny Belle! hugs Jan xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/2/2023 4:38:00 PM

Thank you Jan, hugs Belle xx

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/2/2023 2:55:00 PM

Written - 2nd August 2023 for A Bawdy or Funny Limerick Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin