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Dedication

I wear a happy face Neither grieve nor weep In my eyes you sleep

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/17/2009 9:58:00 AM

This is wonderful haiku poem. I like the essence of the piece and the message. The imagery is excellent. Happy dreams and great job! If you would also like to read some uplifting and inspirational pieces, check out my "2009 Best Christian Poetry Award" in the blog section, dated Sunday, May 10, 2009, regarding my book. The book also has some great haiku poems you'll love. Great job and God bless always! ~Joseph

Date: 10/5/2008 12:35:00 PM

There is a lot of depth in this one for just three lines. The last line is so reflective of the process of grief. Nice job! Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/5/2008 6:22:00 AM

Your love has great depth, as portrayed here so well. Beautiful haiku. Your talent shines. Love, Shar

Deneen White

Date: 10/4/2008 11:59:00 PM

a beautiful write, with alot of depth, so few words, with hidden undercurrents, you are trying to hide how you really feel and not let it show, there is passion and longing there as well, take care Mohammad, Deneen

George Anos

Date: 10/4/2008 6:49:00 PM

Theres so much dormant emotions in this poem... just ready to burst out right after the waking up! Lightly presented but deep undercurrents can still be felt! Very good write Mohammad. Your poem Frost bitten leaf is really good. Brgds. George