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Decrepit, Stealing Our Time

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Written on June 7, 2025

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“By the time you’re 80 years old you’ve learned everything. You only have to remember it.” - George Burns I watched them As they watched me Silently, stunned to see What would be the sum… Shadowed by life’s plans Do they understand? There is One who had it planned For them and me, it’s in His hands I watched them go from young to old Such a life, they lived with zeal Silently, their fate they would seal With love and hope, faith like pure gold Listening to the melody of grace They were my parents, my people They loved God, the church and steeple Inspiring me to adore their embrace I watched as they changed Their lives became a silent prayer It wouldn’t be long, I’d see their gray hair Revealing how their lives were rearranged By the old age blues, the decrepit signs Of golden years, not so golden at all As time passed, their signatures they’d scrawl Upon the bills for a chair that reclines I watched them turn From young to old It was a sight to behold Each wrinkle they’d earn I don’t know how it feels to loose either one Parents who’ve been mine for some 60 years I know, without them here, I’ll be left in tears Yet, when that time comes, their real life has only just begun!

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Date: 6/7/2025 11:02:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Decrepit, Stealing Our Time" write. Great Picture and Ending... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun weekend writing away..........
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Date: 6/7/2025 7:13:00 AM
It is very hard when they die. You will likely be in a fog, but keep praying your way through it. When I knew my mom was going to die the next day, I laid on the guest bed at my Dad’s house, drifting in and out of sleep, praying, knowing my head was on my Savior’s lap the whole night. ((hugs))
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Date: 6/7/2025 1:13:00 AM
now thats an oldie.....goig'boins......len
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