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Decomposure

The gray granite outcroppings loom masticated mountains blasted yet brazen. Their jagged ledges and softer heights topped with rust brown and burnt orange maples. Fog distances them softens them as they seem to overlap Recede ..into semi transparent wash like the edges of a tissue paper collage. Each layer seeming to de compose into the next each symmetrically more exquisite than the next…

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Date: 12/10/2011 3:03:00 PM
Lovely Deb..congrats on your win..I love the "tissue paper collage"..BG
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Date: 12/10/2011 9:49:00 AM
Congratulation on your great win, my friend, for this fantastic Poem. bl
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Date: 12/10/2011 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations x
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Date: 12/9/2011 2:17:00 PM
Very nicely written Debbie. An enjoyable read. Love the imagery. Congratulations
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Date: 12/9/2011 11:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/20/2011 9:47:00 PM
soupmail, Debs.
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Date: 11/17/2011 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's "You Choose Again" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2011 9:01:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on a great first place win with this phenomenal poetry luv..
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Date: 11/15/2011 6:05:00 AM
Beautiful verse,Debbie.Congratulations on your big win!
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Date: 11/14/2011 11:06:00 PM
what a great scenic description, Debs. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/14/2011 5:56:00 PM
A great description of mountains in the distance. Cngratulations on your win Debbie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/14/2011 5:16:00 PM
Congratulations Debbie on your top of the list. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/14/2011 3:13:00 PM
Great Poetry Debbie!!! I love the theme and image that pours from this.. luv Michael
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Date: 11/14/2011 3:11:00 PM
Good one,Debbie.Congratulations on your 1st place win..your really deserved it.keep flying my good friend...
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Date: 11/14/2011 2:59:00 PM
Each word, seems also, to blend into the next....each more exquisite than the next (if I may steal a line of your poem... :) As Bob said...'Bravo"
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Date: 11/14/2011 2:39:00 PM
Bravo Debbie. Well written. Graphic visuals Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/12/2011 12:11:00 AM
I like! beatiful images...BG
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Date: 11/11/2011 4:49:00 PM
An awesome write in your usual style, Debbie. Enchanting imagery. Thanks for sharing. -Mohammad
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