Premiere Contest WinnerDeceptively Black and White

deceptively black and white, like night and day touching everyone yet never truly felt colorless emotions lucent like crystal water as ice fades into warmth of day, destined to melt but a specter, a phantasm, a ghost am I no more than a visitor in your dreams unseen, a diminutive reflection of you, a broken mirror, a thousand silent screams no one sees me, no one hears me, no one alone, so very alone, you look through me like mist in the morning I fade in the light am I here or a figment that you can't see just a breath that tickles the back of your neck invisible, easily brushed away, a mite LOOK AT ME! I am here! a rainbow that needs love too I'm real, I'm not so deceptively black and white
04/23/16
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Murray Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 2:22 PM
Is this poem about the isolation of severe depression James? If so, I wonder how many poets begin writing poetry as a means of communication. This is how I started and from numerous comments I've read over the past five years, it would seem I am not alone in that regard.
Inman Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 9:02 AM
Jean, I would strongly agree with your insight and, yes, it is about depression. I think art of any kind is a very personal experience and expresses our fluctuating moods and emotions throughout our lives. My 14 year old daughter is quite talented at pencil and pastel drawing and I can tell her mood quite often in these drawings.
Allison Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 3:49 PM
Heyyyyyyyyyy you have a trophy by your name - doubt i will ever get one by mine - well done you!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 3:12 PM
yes,it's only a matter of time. Too bad we don't get them in the regular contests, then we would all have them for SURE, Jan!
Inman Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 5:14 PM
It is only a matter of time Jan. Thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 8:21 PM
hey, I see you got a little medal by your poem. Dang,I wish I had one of those!!!
Inman Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 5:16 PM
I'm sure you will have far more than I.
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 7:39 PM
I hope this got a GREAT placement, because you did some very fine work on it. BIG congratulations for this perceptive look at someone who feels invisible.
Inman Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 9:12 AM
Thanks for visit Andrea, and the sweet comment.
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Kept looking and looking for something of yours I have not commented on and wonderful, I found THIS one. Let me read it now.
A   Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 12:49 AM
James, Congrats on your awesome Being Invisible win...Love LINDA
Inman Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 8:49 AM
Thank you PD.
Chansarkar Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 8:35 AM
Loved the poem,congrats!
Inman Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 10:18 AM
Thank you Sara.
Raina Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 5:16 PM
Congratulations James on your win!
Inman Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 7:34 PM
Meenakshi, thank you.
Allison Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 11:13 AM
many congrats James a very well deserved win:-) hugs Jan xx
Inman Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 7:25 PM
Thank you Jan
Devnath  Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 10:25 AM
i have no words to say here for your this poem which is expressed with extreme beauty of mystic vibration. Very simple but rooted in to depth of cool heart feeling. A great congrats to you my lovely friend. ++7++. Loved always, bl
Inman Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 10:57 AM
Thank you for the visit BL, and your lovely comment.
May Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 10:25 AM
Congrats on your top win!
Inman Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 10:57 AM
Thank you Joseph.
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 9:08 AM
James, a big CONGRATULATIONS to you on your first place win, awesome poem and I am loving it 7 and it is a fav for me ~
Inman Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 10:54 AM
BW, thank you for your wonderful comment.
Flower Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 8:36 AM
Great write, James. Congrats for the top win! :)
Inman Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 10:53 AM
Thank you so much Moon.
A  Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 8:28 AM
This one I loved so much, every line was impressing. I do hope you love your number one win. James, Congratulations on your Invisible win. I thank you for the entry. I have a blog up, describing the experience of running my first premiere contest. "My first experience was not as easy ... :( DEPRESSION" drop by and enjoy the few I did place. Forever **SKAT**
Inman Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 10:52 AM
Oh, SKAT, I'm really glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for hosting a beautiful contest. This is one that touches everyone at some point in their lives. I'm sorry it was so difficult for you, but know, it is appreciated.
Canerdy Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 8:08 AM
A 7-PLUS, John. Congratulations on your big win. Janice
Inman Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Thanks Janice.
Onclaud Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 5:31 PM
deep words capture the hidden light within... marvelous write, james..huggs
Inman Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 6:11 PM
Nette, thank you for the kind comment.
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