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Deception - One Liners Contest

I was blinded by your words   - I wish I’d read between the lines

Contest: One Liners
Sponsor: Silent One

4th December 2015

angerbetrayalhow i feelmonoku

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Grace Mutindi

December 7, 2015 at 9:01 AM

Hi Allison...true that all that glitters isn't gold. Congrats on your win!

Jan Allison

December 7, 2015 at 11:14 AM

Thanks Grace:-) hugs jan xx

Janice Canerdy

December 6, 2015 at 7:41 PM

A good one, Jan! Congratulations on your win. Janice

Jan Allison

December 7, 2015 at 1:11 AM

Many thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

December 6, 2015 at 7:44 AM

Congratulations! A fine win indeed!

Jan Allison

December 6, 2015 at 9:08 AM

Thanks Judy:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman

December 5, 2015 at 10:11 PM

Well done, Jan! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jan Allison

December 6, 2015 at 5:24 AM

Thanks Kim:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Michael Tor

December 5, 2015 at 7:07 PM

Very clever Jan. Congratulations on your win.

Jan Allison

December 5, 2015 at 7:13 PM

Thanks Michael:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

December 5, 2015 at 6:41 PM

BIG congrats, my friend!! I think I will never finish here tonight!

Jan Allison

December 5, 2015 at 6:42 PM

I know the feeling:-) hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

December 5, 2015 at 5:57 PM

Congratulations Jan.

Jan Allison

December 5, 2015 at 6:00 PM

Thanks Nayda:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

December 5, 2015 at 12:04 PM

Jan... Lovely win.... Love Skat

Jan Allison

December 5, 2015 at 12:05 PM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan x

Curtis Johnson

December 5, 2015 at 11:52 AM

Good work Jan. Congrats on your win. Curtis.

Jan Allison

December 5, 2015 at 11:58 AM

Thanks Curtis:-) hugs jan xx

Barbara Gorelick

December 5, 2015 at 11:19 AM

Good work as usual. this is very clever. congrats. BG

Jan Allison

December 5, 2015 at 11:20 AM

Thanks Barbara:-) hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema

December 5, 2015 at 10:39 AM

Congrats Jan on your placement!

Jan Allison

December 5, 2015 at 10:40 AM

Thanks Balveen:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

December 5, 2015 at 9:04 AM

It's true, Jan, but some things never show up till it's too late. So, no blaming yourself...we are not mind readers or fortune tellers! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

December 5, 2015 at 9:30 AM

So true Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Edward Ebbs

December 5, 2015 at 9:01 AM

Nice, congrats!

Jan Allison

December 5, 2015 at 9:30 AM

Thanks Ed:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

December 5, 2015 at 9:01 AM

Stopping back to congratulate you on your fine win, Jan! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

December 5, 2015 at 9:29 AM

Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

December 5, 2015 at 8:25 AM

Jan, congratulations on your awesome win:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

December 5, 2015 at 9:29 AM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

December 5, 2015 at 8:17 AM

Jan,great line I still have not learned that one. Congratulations on your win!

Jan Allison

December 5, 2015 at 9:29 AM

Think we all get deceived at some time in our lives Eve:-( hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

December 5, 2015 at 7:41 AM

happens more often than we care to admit, great one liner and win Jan ;)

Jan Allison

December 5, 2015 at 7:54 AM

Oh sadly it does Cas and by the ones we least expect:-( hugs jan xx

Susan Gentry

December 5, 2015 at 6:56 AM

I like this... Congrats on contest.

Jan Allison

December 5, 2015 at 7:53 AM

Thanks Susan:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

December 4, 2015 at 7:31 PM

Good one, Jan. It's exactly how we feel when we have been deceived.

Jan Allison

December 4, 2015 at 7:32 PM

It is Andrea - I wrote this about a month ago - now is the ideal time to post it:-) hugs jan xx

CayCay Godwin

December 4, 2015 at 3:50 PM

We have all wished this, at least I have. Well said! CayCay

Jan Allison

December 4, 2015 at 3:51 PM

I think we all have been taken in with sweet words CayCay:-( hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

December 4, 2015 at 2:48 PM

This is great, Jan! Very powerful one liner! Wish you all the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

December 4, 2015 at 2:52 PM

Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

December 4, 2015 at 8:37 AM

so very true, Jan... and g'luck to you.

Jan Allison

December 4, 2015 at 8:50 AM

Sadly it is so true Lin:-( hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

December 4, 2015 at 5:09 AM

right on the dot, jan... remarkable write!.huggs

Jan Allison

December 4, 2015 at 7:06 AM

Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

December 4, 2015 at 2:27 AM

To see between the lines is always wise,though when we trust someone so much ,sometimes we believe all they say without searching deeper.Love this sweet Jan.

Jan Allison

December 4, 2015 at 3:12 AM

Oh so true Charma and it is so easy to be taken in by sweet words:-( hugs Jan xx