Liam Mcdaid Poet Quatrain

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unrhymed quatrains 

Deceiver

We are all victims of circumstances 
Crying out to a world for peace 
yet none heed the voices
calling to the high heavens 

Those of war that weep unfairly treated
Where dirty tricks begin licking wounds 
lead filled poisoning born from fire brainwashing people 
to justify killing there is no compassion showing 

When really there is only one face showing 
that which speaks truth hate
Inside each and everyone of us 
unforgiving reality dwells the secret pact

The deceiver tests our faith inside our weakness
it's here we find strength and understanding 
Love holds the moral code of conduct 
Where truth within virtues echo

A structure shines with happiness 
Joy the brightest light
Into the whispering dead ghosts who never speak back 
Burning memories remain unborn sacrificed into the lake of fire 

Embers of pain haunt a living soul 
looking back reliving truth right and wrong 
we all know black and white no in between stand or fall 
I bless myself prepared for battle each and every night

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Dorian Petersen Potter October 29, 2016 at 8:09 AM Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is a very powerful, outstanding poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned with truth n' caring.Yes,very sadly the world we live in these days is completely in chaos, Liam.All the very sad, terrible events, injustices everywhere, make my heart n' soul very sad everyday.Prayers are very powerful, we need pray more for all Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.Excellent piece!Awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!I wish you n' your very dear family all the best always.To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Charlie Smith October 29, 2016 at 8:09 AM Fourth verse rings out to bare repeating beyond this page. Well done Liam, best wishes...

Anne-Lise Andresen October 29, 2016 at 6:07 AM - Nothin can justify killing ... even if they are "brainwashed" ... all are born with heart and own thoughts - A cruel world we live in ... frightening development - A powerful poems, with deep thoughts dear Liam - A 7 - Great written - Best wishes for a peaceful and beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)