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unrhymed quatrains 

We are all victims of circumstances Crying out to a world for peace yet none heed the voices calling to the high heavens Those of war that weep unfairly treated Where dirty tricks begin licking wounds lead filled poisoning born from fire brainwashing people to justify killing there is no compassion showing When really there is only one face showing that which speaks truth hate Inside each and everyone of us unforgiving reality dwells the secret pact The deceiver tests our faith inside our weakness it's here we find strength and understanding Love holds the moral code of conduct Where truth within virtues echo A structure shines with happiness Joy the brightest light Into the whispering dead ghosts who never speak back Burning memories remain unborn sacrificed into the lake of fire Embers of pain haunt a living soul looking back reliving truth right and wrong we all know black and white no in between stand or fall I bless myself prepared for battle each and every night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/29/2016 8:09:00 AM
Fourth verse rings out to bare repeating beyond this page. Well done Liam, best wishes...
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Date: 10/29/2016 8:09:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is a very powerful, outstanding poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned with truth n' caring.Yes,very sadly the world we live in these days is completely in chaos, Liam.All the very sad, terrible events, injustices everywhere, make my heart n' soul very sad everyday.Prayers are very powerful, we need pray more for all Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.Excellent piece!Awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!I wish you n' your very dear family all the best always.To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 10/29/2016 6:07:00 AM
- Nothin can justify killing ... even if they are "brainwashed" ... all are born with heart and own thoughts - A cruel world we live in ... frightening development - A powerful poems, with deep thoughts dear Liam - A 7 - Great written - Best wishes for a peaceful and beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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