Decay

A tiny homeless man begging Death sits a coiled sidewalk fetus

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/22/2020 9:47:00 AM

Dave, your striking imagery is intense and heartbreaking. Such evocative and emotive expression. Congratulations for your wonderful placement in Brian's contest.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2020 2:09:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Dave :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2020 1:42:00 PM

Very emotive and expressive work. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/14/2020 8:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning write-Alexis

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/5/2020 5:13:00 AM

Hello Dave Collins, I think that all the homeless people feel this way. Enjoy your day my friend.

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/3/2020 8:44:00 AM

Gripping.