Deborah Burch Poet Limerick

Debalaur-Burbondoc

Debalaur-burbondoc 

There once was a small island secret
Where dragons they lived by an edict
The fauna and floura
They ate a plethora
'Till soon thier great size it did Re-strict.

komodo dragons
present day island secret
edict still upheld

©deborah burch
 3/26/2012

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Nette Onclaud March 31, 2012 at 1:18 PM super cheers to you on your great win, deborah..:) huggs

Carolyn Devonshire March 30, 2012 at 3:42 PM Way cool limerick, Deborah, and I like the haiku as well. Got a real kick out of the way you used the rhyme in the limerick -- plethora, edit, flora, etc. Very creative! Congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown March 30, 2012 at 3:44 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D's "Dinosaur" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich March 29, 2012 at 10:30 PM YAY for your win, my fellow snackasaurus, but your diet is horrible!!! heehee

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 29, 2012 at 8:45 PM congrats Deborah on a fab win for this dino delight luv with an awesome title too ..luv..

Joyce Johnson March 29, 2012 at 8:28 PM Congratulations on a worthy win. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A March 29, 2012 at 6:42 PM Debalaur-burbondoc~.Congratulations ;-) with your awesome #2 THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always & forever*PD Deborah Burch March 29, 2012 at 11:42 PM Thank you so much *PD!!! It was fun!! Thinking of you...big huggsss my friend,love~deb

Poet Destroyer A March 27, 2012 at 9:11 PM HA, this is a fun one... thank you..pd

Andrea Dietrich March 26, 2012 at 9:40 PM hmmm, I think your dino is a bit like mine!!! Cute one, Deborah. good luck in the contest.

Harry Horsman March 26, 2012 at 9:11 AM Like this very much, Deborah. good luck in contest. harry Deborah Burch March 26, 2012 at 6:05 PM Thank you Harry!!Very Much!!And Goood Luck to you in the contest, too!!! big hugggsss,love~deb

Barbara Gorelick March 26, 2012 at 7:24 AM Good job...creative...BG Deborah Burch March 26, 2012 at 6:06 PM Thanks Barbara so much! Big huggsss~deb