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Penned, June 20, 2026
For the International Contest, Heat of the Heartbeat
Sponsor, Ink Empress

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Death's Knife

d e a t h came . . . 
like a thief and took my love
I kissed his stone cold lips
his beautiful face frozen in time
the place where his heart once beat
all was still
oh, I wanted to scream and wail
          w h y  . . . 

in the mists of your eyes
        I fall into a restless dream
twirling and swirling ~
then, I am walking among headstones
I know the way well
and find myself standing at your grave
the roses I brought  yesterday 
         lay dead and withered~

I feel the heat of your heartbeat
as gauzy clouds sweep us away . . .  to
where the sky drifts into the sea
and I am lost in your love
my ruby lips find yours
you are whispering into my ear
        I will love you for a thousand years
and more ~
and we are drifting on the aqua sea
             vast and endless . . .  

but the dream fades~
and I whisper
   tears falling
     oh, fear not my  l o v e 
I will find you beyond the stars
death's knife cannot destroy
this love 
for the vow and bond between us
        is eternal ~
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Croft Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 7:54 AM
congratulations on your win!
La France Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 8:01 AM
Karen, thanks for the congratulations ~
Empress Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 7:46 AM
Dear Constance, This is beyond beautiful, profound, so dark and deeply emotive and poignant! I cant help but be in awe of your opening line especially here! I love how youv painted imagery and also your wordplay here is very fitting for the theme of the poem! This made my heart hurt, and thats what I like in a poem, a poem that makes me feel things. And yours did that in such an exquisite manner! I also love thee ending and the title is catchy! Death’s knife! Whoa! Fave it is! Congratulations on your top win! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always ~
La France Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 8:02 AM
Ink, thank you for the contest and my amazing placement, and for the lovely comment, compliment, congratulations and for the FAV, that is amazing too, love ~
Daniel Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 1:21 AM
Wonderful poem, Constance, great use of the lines:)
La France Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 5:11 PM
Joanna, thank for the comment and compliment ~
George Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 11:03 PM
When death's knife stabs the one we love most in life, our grief is beyond expression. I can fathom the depth of your feelings of pain and desperation. May God heal you.
La France Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 5:12 PM
Valsa, thank you for the compassion and comment, appreciate ~
Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 7:57 PM
When my mom died, my grandson asked how he would find me in heaven. I told him that God brought us together and we will find each other. The heartbreak you feel and the true love is so evident.
La France Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 5:14 PM
Kim, thank you for the comment, you understand this depth of grief, it is eternal and will never, ever fade, for it is/was true and pure~
Ibeh Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 6:18 PM
Haunting and powerful, Constance:-) Well-done, and good luck!
La France Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 5:14 PM
Edward, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and encouragement ~
Smith  Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 6:08 PM
Wonderful prose. You have woven the prompts very well.
La France Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 5:15 PM
Alison, thank you for the compliment, appreciate ~
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