Death's Cold Hand

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Death's Cold Hand I have often felt Death's cold hand, it all began in my childhood; a girl before tombs I now stand. I have often felt Death's cold hand, oh, was it really God's demand? weeping, I never understood, I have often felt Death's cold hand; it all began in my childhood. _____________________________ April 6, 2019 Poetry/Triolet/Death's Cold Hand Copyright Protected, ID 19-1131-553-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Favorite Poem Last Week (March 3 - April 6) sponsor, Lu Loo First Place

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Susan Ashley

Date: 4/19/2019 9:20:00 PM

Sadly beautiful emotions so powerfully penned, Dear Heart. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Eve Roper

Date: 4/18/2019 10:16:00 PM

Great Triolet, Dear Heart. Congratulations on your wonderful win in Laura's contest. Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/17/2019 2:09:00 PM

It is so sad when a child has to cope with death. Congratulations on having this poignant triolet a top winner Constance. Have a lovely Easter. xxoo

Constance La France
Date: 4/17/2019 6:01:00 PM

Connie, thanks for the congratulations, have a great Easter too !

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/7/2019 5:57:00 AM

constance, intense reflections on demise splendidly crafted... i'll try to make one for you...huggs

Constance La France
Date: 4/7/2019 5:52:00 PM

nette, thanks for the compliment, I am sure you will write a beauty ~

Constance La France

Date: 4/6/2019 10:18:00 AM

This is an example of Triolet for my Writing Challenge 1, April 2019, Its all about 8 - meter is not required for the contest unless you want to do yours in meter. Hope you will consider giving my challenge a try. This is one of three forms to use and one of ten themes to select from.Check it out under the Poetry Contests Section of Poetry Soup.