Death So Divine

It’s a tale of terrible tears and tone
Borne beyond body, blood and bone
Stronger than sand, steel and stone,
An alluring ambassador left all alone.
Thorns and thistles thronged His throne
Opened onslaught on Him by his own
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 8:56 AM
YOu are a good soul, ADeleke and to realize the full significance what Christ did for us!
La France Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 2:08 PM
You have a wonderful gift for words~~
Campi Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 2:36 PM
LOve this work of yours. Thanks for your kind words on my work. It was a surprise to me.
Abbey-Mensah Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 8:01 AM
Wonderful piece my dear friend.. would love to hear more from you... love Felix...
Johnson Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 7:58 AM
Great alliteration and wonderful story told beautifully. Welcome back. Love, Joyce
Pangelov Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 7:20 AM
I think it's successful use of alliteration, because it creates the necessary sound, which reinforces the impression. tone bone stone, alone. throne Yet there is a softening ...
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