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Death On the Beach

Partners in rhythm Each following another, To die on the beach. Entry for Ocean Waves Haiku [5/7/5 syllable form only] By Tania Kitchin 26th January 2019. Placed 6th.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/8/2019 10:10:00 AM

Good one. I guess you mean waves. Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Gary Smith
Date: 3/8/2019 10:12:00 AM

I do Sara, thank you. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2019 6:50:00 PM

this is really nice, Gary!! Congrats on the winner list.

Gary Smith
Date: 1/31/2019 6:53:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/29/2019 8:20:00 AM

- This one was touching ... well done and congratulations, Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith
Date: 1/29/2019 8:21:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/28/2019 7:55:00 PM

A sad but unique haiku, congratulations on your winning placement!

Gary Smith
Date: 1/29/2019 6:10:00 AM

Thank you Tania. :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/28/2019 7:31:00 PM

Wow that is quite a turn. Good one, Gary.

Gary Smith
Date: 1/29/2019 6:10:00 AM

Thank you Line. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/26/2019 5:51:00 PM

Hello Gary Smith, this is a sad poem. Yet two people in love I do understand they would die on the beach. Hav a nice evening my friend.

Gary Smith
Date: 1/26/2019 5:55:00 PM

Thank you Darlene. :)