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Partners in rhythm
Each following another,
To die on the beach.






Entry for Ocean Waves Haiku
[5/7/5 syllable form only]
By Tania Kitchin
26th January 2019. Placed 6th.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/8/2019 10:10:00 AM
Good one. I guess you mean waves. Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara
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Date: 3/8/2019 10:12:00 AM
I do Sara, thank you. :)
Date: 1/30/2019 6:50:00 PM
this is really nice, Gary!! Congrats on the winner list.
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Date: 1/31/2019 6:53:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. :)
Date: 1/29/2019 8:20:00 AM
- This one was touching ... well done and congratulations, Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/29/2019 8:21:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. :)
Date: 1/28/2019 7:55:00 PM
A sad but unique haiku, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 1/29/2019 6:10:00 AM
Thank you Tania. :)
Date: 1/28/2019 7:31:00 PM
Wow that is quite a turn. Good one, Gary.
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Date: 1/29/2019 6:10:00 AM
Thank you Line. :)
Date: 1/26/2019 5:51:00 PM
Hello Gary Smith, this is a sad poem. Yet two people in love I do understand they would die on the beach. Hav a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 1/26/2019 5:55:00 PM
Thank you Darlene. :)