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Death On the Beach

Partners in rhythm
Each following another,
To die on the beach.






Entry for Ocean Waves Haiku
[5/7/5 syllable form only]
By Tania Kitchin
26th January 2019. Placed 6th.

Copyright © Gary Smith | Year Posted 2019

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March 8, 2019 at 10:10 AM

Good one. I guess you mean waves. Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

March 8, 2019 at 10:12 AM

I do Sara, thank you. :)

Andrea Dietrich

January 30, 2019 at 6:50 PM

this is really nice, Gary!! Congrats on the winner list.

January 31, 2019 at 6:53 AM

Thank you Andrea. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 29, 2019 at 8:20 AM

- This one was touching ... well done and congratulations, Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

January 29, 2019 at 8:21 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. :)

January 28, 2019 at 7:55 PM

A sad but unique haiku, congratulations on your winning placement!

January 29, 2019 at 6:10 AM

Thank you Tania. :)

January 28, 2019 at 7:31 PM

Wow that is quite a turn. Good one, Gary.

January 29, 2019 at 6:10 AM

Thank you Line. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 26, 2019 at 5:51 PM

Hello Gary Smith, this is a sad poem. Yet two people in love I do understand they would die on the beach. Hav a nice evening my friend.

January 26, 2019 at 5:55 PM

Thank you Darlene. :)

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