Death of the Party


Everybody is having big fun,
the party is lively ... really jumping
The love is being spread freely
All the ladies are looking glamorously good,
all the fellas are dressed like stars of Hollywood
Yeah, it's all good,
everything's grooving like it should
The music is popping,
inhibitions are dropping
Conversations are getting intense,
party mood is shifting towards romance
But then comes the pumpkin ring at the door,
changing everything ... it ain't like it was before
Laughter all dies down at midnight,
hushed voices creep around the room
Somehow a once happy party got real gloom and doom
Like the sickly feeling you get 
when you ate some bad mushrooms
Sly done arrived on the scene,
turning this cool party into a bad happening
And when Sly calls,
everyone know what that means
Sly is urban legend of a dark kind:
He is like Bad News Bears,
Ray Charles falling down the stairs
Jim Jones flavored Kool-Aid,
Titanic crushing Little Miss Mermaid
If Sly turns up in your neighborhood,
it's all bad, it ain't never good
He is the Wolfman letting his hair down,
he's rotten tomatoes thrown by Killer Clowns
He is the Grim Reaper on last rites patrol,
he's the Black Plague dirty dancing on your soul
Sly is surely the death of any party ...
if he shows up,
bring your own funeral tickets please

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/6/2017 6:23:00 PM
This is soo cool Freddie--super cool !! ~~ Jeanie ~~ xoxo
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Date: 3/4/2017 2:48:00 PM
You made me smile Freddie but there is a sad side that one bad apple can spoil the enjoyment of everyone else... Note to self not to let 'Sly' know if I ever throw a party ! Hugs Jan xx
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 3/5/2017 5:51:00 PM
Ty, Jan. Sly always knows, unfortunately. LOL! Love always.
Date: 3/4/2017 2:05:00 PM
"Titanic crushing Little Miss Mermaid"... Best line ever ;) you have me giggling large xomo
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 3/5/2017 5:54:00 PM
Ty, Maureen. That Titanic crushing Little Miss Mermaid had me laughing too when I was writing it. LOL! Inspiration came courtesy of a Michael Franks song, "When Sly Calls." Love rules.
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