Death of November

Like a child too long at the fair
November is tired and needs to slumber

Like an aging woman past her prime
November is grey and sad with

black cloaked skeletons of trees
who once wore summer's splendor

Like a homeless urchin
November has no home, no purpose

and wears tattered clothes of 
a lost Autumn

Like the spent tears of a widow
for a husband who did not come

back from a long ago war
November's battle is over, its weapons

thrown down, its armies defeated
Like the last dying wish on a soldier's lips

it pulls at the skirts of an oncoming December,
and begs to be laid in its final rest

in the graveyard of a dying year....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/4/2008 11:22:00 AM
Clearwater...
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Date: 12/4/2008 9:12:00 AM
Superb imagery... November is my birthday month so I get all the grim poems! ...seriously though, this is well conceived and expressed. It made me shiver, even here in Central Florida! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 11/28/2008 4:00:00 PM
You almost make we weep for this poor desolute month!! Sad old thing it is....Perhaps we need to give it another holiday, perhaps it needs a little shot in the arm!! Well done, personifcation!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 11/28/2008 3:32:00 PM
Valerie - The month of ever shorting days - Wonderful use of this form - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 11/28/2008 3:32:00 PM
Valerie - The month of ever shorting days - Wonderful use of this form - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 11/28/2008 1:25:00 PM
Well, you do bring life (or death) to one of my favorite months of the year, which truly does make this sad for me. Love your use of personification here. Excellent write. Love, Shar
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