Death of a Town

A town wheezes the last rites over 
its people through phlegm-ridden
lungs and turgid cankers.

Its blistered wounds are coated 
in the mud that lines its harbour 
and creeks.

The loss of the dockyards was its lowest tide.

Now, existing work taunts the town from
the other side of the harbour, 
separated by low tides and disused ferries.

As the town slides closer to its knees,
the landlords willingly house 
the subsidised washouts.

And gang fights marry into husband 
and wife fights, twisted around petty 
pride and sectarian bigotry. 

Leaving kids to run about half-stoned 
and roaring with cider, where the 
unpredictable waits around the corner.

And rape happens behind the church, 
under God's careful watch, where worship
of the needle leaves only emptied lives.

And lost souls sleep under cardboard palaces.

This is a town that wants them out, so that 
it can shut the doors, draw the blinds
and start again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/1/2016 11:18:00 AM
I believe that spot missed my bucket list, well done Terry...
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Date: 10/1/2016 9:48:00 AM
you have visited my home town crewe then ,lol some cracking lines in this And rape happens behind the church, under God's careful watch, where worship of the needle leaves only emptied lives. And lost souls sleep under cardboard palaces.
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