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Death of a Mulloway

It lay on the sand, its bronze scales wearing a soft shroud of moonlight, a gaping mouth no longer flushed by water but by the thin poison of pure air. I reached down and ran my fingers along the translucent mucus covering its body and felt the deep tremble of a life still fighting to free itself, the muscles and taut sinews now stripped of strength could only harden beneath the touch of my hand. It no longer moved but gave an occasional soundless gasp. I wondered what horrors were flashing or fading in the recesses of its brain, what it was feeling in those moments before dying. Its upward eye was locked in a frozen stare, a black pupil opening to a hole that plummeted beyond earthly depth. It seemed to hold me locked within an orbit that had opened around the gravity an inpouring dark. Fifty years on I feel the draw of its stare, the pull of the unknowable centered deep within its eye, still slowly winding me in, only now I am so much closer to its rim.

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Date: 3/22/2023 4:19:00 PM
Some deaths touch us more, Paul: I spent one summer with my Dad out west at an Artesian bore. I found the skeleton of a cow who had been in calf. That smaller skeleton inside her bones has always touched me. I wrote a poem called “Small Echo of Death.: Best, SuZ
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/23/2023 5:18:00 AM
Thanks Paul: Your observations on the dying fish are full of insight which you portray with a deep sensitivity. You have honored it by this touching memorial. Best, SuZ
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/23/2023 4:14:00 AM
You have described quite a powerful image Suzanne. I can see how it has found a way to be preserved in a poem. Thankyou for taking the time to read my meditation on the mulloway and for yr comments. Valued. Regards
Date: 3/12/2023 7:10:00 AM
This is amazing poetry, Paul A pleasure to read, leaving the reader to think about their own mortality and the fragility of life.
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/12/2023 1:43:00 PM
Daniel, too kind in your comments, thankyou. Means a lot that a poem finds a friend. This poem was bubbling around in the subconscious for some time I think, suddenly popping out as if wanting air unlike the poor mulloway. Paul

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