Get Your Premium Membership

Death of a Loved One

Death of a loved one Fifty-five years! More or less! I did not know, then, How, to your adieu, o mother, I said Amen; Later, like the ache of an amputated limb, Existence, like a gloom-glaring jail cell, grew grim...! I know, from the frail earthen pitcher of physique, Your soul, O my mother, that, for long, was homesick; Had taken its flight far from this interim earth, And amalgamated into the endless mirth...! It's not due to doubts about your life eternal, Nor the chance of being a creature infernal; Your passing through the gateway of naked newness, Is as clear as crystal to me, though seems clueless…! Tingles of your touches tinged into tenderness, Turned too into touch-me-not of tentativeness; Your existence in me is a continuum, It's not a cloudy chemical residuum...! I know your death is not a dark dusk but a dawn, Designs of resurrection are dazzlingly drawn; Ignorance that ignites the minds with illusion, Fails to form fundamentally free faith fusion...!!! 04 April 2023 Death of a loved one Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker Rhymes Checked At: Rhyme Zone Syllables Checked At: How Many Syllables

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/13/2023 9:17:00 PM
"I know your death is not a dark dusk but a dawn, Designs of resurrection are dazzlingly drawn;". A mother's departure from this earth is a pain we fail to reckon with. But we have to find solace in the thought that death is not a dark dusk, but a bright dawn and we die in body to resurrect in spirit! Beautifully written Chris.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/4/2023 12:05:00 PM
- An interesting interpretation on the theme ... last verses tell me a lot ... good luck in the contest, Alex - Happy Easter :) - hugs
Login to Reply
Alex Avatar
Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/4/2023 6:47:00 PM
Thank you very much for your encouraging comments. I wish you a very happy Easter!

Book: Shattered Sighs