Death of a Loved One

Death of a loved one

Fifty-five years! More or less! I did not know, then,
How, to your adieu, o mother, I said Amen;
Later, like the ache of an amputated limb,
Existence, like a gloom-glaring jail cell, grew grim...!

I know, from the frail earthen pitcher of physique,
Your soul, O my mother, that, for long, was homesick;
Had taken its flight far from this interim earth,
And amalgamated into the endless mirth...!

It's not due to doubts about your life eternal,
Nor the chance of being a creature infernal;
Your passing through the gateway of naked newness,
Is as clear as crystal to me, though seems clueless…!

Tingles of your touches tinged into tenderness,
Turned too into touch-me-not of tentativeness;
Your existence in me is a continuum,
It's not a cloudy chemical residuum...!

I know your death is not a dark dusk but a dawn,
Designs of resurrection are dazzlingly drawn;
Ignorance that ignites the minds with illusion,
Fails to form fundamentally free faith fusion...!!!


04 April 2023
Death of a loved one Poetry Contest
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George Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 9:17 PM
"I know your death is not a dark dusk but a dawn, Designs of resurrection are dazzlingly drawn;". A mother's departure from this earth is a pain we fail to reckon with. But we have to find solace in the thought that death is not a dark dusk, but a bright dawn and we die in body to resurrect in spirit! Beautifully written Chris.
Andresen Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 12:05 PM
- An interesting interpretation on the theme ... last verses tell me a lot ... good luck in the contest, Alex - Happy Easter :) - hugs
Alex Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 6:47 PM
Thank you very much for your encouraging comments. I wish you a very happy Easter!
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