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Death of a Love Affair

they lost the gale-force wind keeping their affair passionately aglow. it struggled for existence with the white-hot heat dialed down to low; like a candle's moribund flame, it flickered, and soon dimmed out. Bite Size Contest No. 62 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier Date written: 04/30/2023

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Date: 5/2/2023 6:33:00 PM
Such lovely imagery, Edward, congratulations:)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/3/2023 11:55:00 AM
Thank you very much, Joanna:-)
Date: 5/2/2023 3:56:00 PM
Hi Edward, Congratulations on your HM. Have a great day-Alexis
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/2/2023 5:51:00 PM
Thank you very much, Alexis:-)
Date: 4/30/2023 6:00:00 PM
Excellent word usage, Edward. Very descriptive.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/30/2023 7:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Daniel:-)
Date: 4/30/2023 2:46:00 PM
ah, the love that cannot survive without intensity! Well written! The heat of love burns intensely!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/30/2023 7:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Fran:-)
Date: 4/30/2023 12:51:00 PM
like a candle's moribund flame, it flickered, and soon dimmed out...so aptly descriptive of the title of your poem!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/30/2023 7:04:00 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

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