Death Of A Hero

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Tom Cunningham.


Written on 19th April 2025
Write Twelve Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest - Sponsored By Constance La France.

Just because someone isn’t wearing a bandage or shows no outward sign of illness doesn’t mean that they are not.
Quote by poet.


Sam lived two doors down and kept to himself, some thought him strange,
I found out he'd been in the marines and was suffering from PTSD, he always acknowledged me with a nod and a faint smile but Sam rarely spoke a word.
I felt sorry for him as he lived all alone with no one to share his problems with.
On one dark December night before Christmas I was walking home from work,
I was fifty yards from home when three thugs appeared and surrounded me,
"Your money and phone" one said, I froze on the spot and reluctantly put my hand in my pocket, then out of nowhere Sam appeared, baseball bat in hand, he swung at one of the thugs who went down with blood pouring from his nose, one of them then lunged at Sam and stabbed him repeatedly, Sam collapsed and the cowards ran off, I quickly dialled 911, “I’ve called for help" I told Sam, he looked at me smiling and said ,"Peace at last" then his eyes closed and he was gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/30/2025 10:30:00 AM
Tom, you reveal a lot of things in this story. One being the stress and horror people exposed to war and seeing unpleasant death can go through for years after witnessing it. In addition you talk about people who have courage and will put their own lives on the line for another person or cause. We owe a lot to our heroes and it's shameful if they don't get the help they need to begin to normalize. Mental anguish is quite real and can be terrifying. Thanks for the story.
Login to Reply
Cunningham Avatar
Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/30/2025 12:50:00 PM
Thank you very much Duke, you try and do well in life making a living for yourself and some lowlifes try and take something your hard earned cash has bought, then on the other side of the coin you have those who'll put others before themselves often taking a risk. Sadly in the case of veterans who many have witnessed some unspeakable horrors in conflicts, many are too proud to seek help, I'd read about some British soldiers who returned from Afghanistan and took their own lives unable to cope with what they'd seen. For some taking their own lives was the only way they could be at peace, thankfully care for returning service men and women has improved greatly. Tom
Date: 4/21/2025 7:11:00 AM
Oh my Tom. Quite vivid. God bless our warriors. Congratulations! :)
Login to Reply
Cunningham Avatar
Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/21/2025 11:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Linda, we should never forget the sacrifices those brave men and women do for us. Tom
Date: 4/20/2025 12:53:00 PM
Tom, a powerful and tragic story. Veterans often suffer in silence and are often unappreciated these days. Congratulations on your win in the contest.
Login to Reply
Cunningham Avatar
Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/20/2025 1:12:00 PM
Thank you very much Tania, that's so true, often they're too proud to ask for help, many turn to drink or drugs to try and blot out the memories of things that they've witnessed. Hope you're on the mend. Tom
Date: 4/20/2025 10:57:00 AM
- What a sad story, Tom - (I almost lost this wonderful poem ... a hero who suffered in silence :( - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - Hope you had a lovely Easter ... and enjoy your chocolate egg :) - hugs
Login to Reply
Cunningham Avatar
Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/20/2025 12:01:00 PM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Been Mr piggy where chocolate is concerned lol. I'll be good tommorow, hope you've had a lovely day. Enjoy the coming week. Tom
Date: 4/20/2025 10:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad "Death Of A Hero" write. Great quote and picture. Happy/Blessed Easter Day......
Login to Reply
Cunningham Avatar
Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/20/2025 11:59:00 AM
Thank you very much Paula, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hope youve had a lovely Easter day. Enjoy your week ahead. Tom
Date: 4/19/2025 11:41:00 AM
I have a friend who when stuck for accomodation had to live with a retired S a s captain who did 20 yrs service i joked Has he spent 30 years trying to forget? The Answer was 'exactly right' well done Tom.'
Login to Reply
Cunningham Avatar
Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/19/2025 12:36:00 PM
Thank you very much Joe, the scenes they must witness are the stuff of nightmares, you have to have nerves of steel to cope with those images in your head. Happy Easter to you. Tom
Date: 4/19/2025 8:33:00 AM
Tom, what a powerful story. Unfortunately, so many of the world's heroes are abandoned. America's streets are filled with such horror stories.
Login to Reply
Cunningham Avatar
Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/19/2025 10:20:00 AM
Thank you very much Jerry, sadly it's the same here, not enough support is given, I've read many took their own lives, unable to cope with the horrors they witnessed. Tom
Date: 4/19/2025 5:26:00 AM
Gosh! My heart, hurts, reading this haunting tale! So seamlessly delivered! You are such a brilliant storyteller dear tom, sam saying that as his last words is so sad, makes me feel how much he must have endured emotional pain, which many often that have fought in marines etc do have , ptsd, sad, youv as always left me speechless! You are a natural with these! Very powerful free verse! Best wishes. Sending you light always! Pleasure visiting your page today!
Login to Reply
Cunningham Avatar
Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/19/2025 6:14:00 AM
Thank you very much IE, had plenty of practice when my three daughters were growing up, bedtime stories. Many soldiers experience unimaginable horrors, to see those images all the time must be so hard to cope with, I know I'd struggle. For some death is a relief from it. Have a lovely weekend Tom
Date: 4/19/2025 4:34:00 AM
oh, Tom. That was an unexpected goosebump ending! I cannot imagine being totally rational again after seeing what some of those soldiers witnessed in war.
Login to Reply
Cunningham Avatar
Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/19/2025 5:08:00 AM
Thank you very much Lin, I don't think I'd ever get over it seeing the horrors of War, When many returned from the gulf War they couldn't cope and thought it unmanly to seek help, sadly many took their own lives. Tom
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad