Death March

Out in the thickets 
Time stands alone 
Limping around 
Minute by minute 
Not hearing a sound 

But a melodic siren within 
Off pitch and piercing 

Hold back the pain 
No longer 

March on it screams 
March on 

Let the beast devour my flesh 
And allow me to 
March on



* How my body feels after stepping my physical therapy up a     notch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/17/2017 7:09:00 PM
It did sound very painful, but you will reap the benefits in time, and I hope for you this time comes quickly:) Amitiés
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Date: 5/17/2017 12:46:00 AM
such a solid expression of endurance... i do stretches for low back pain; blame it on dancing.. greeeat stuff, tim..huggs
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Date: 5/16/2017 7:52:00 PM
Ouch! I hope you are not pushing it too hard! Very painful poem-Good writing! I felt every word... O.O
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Date: 5/16/2017 4:26:00 PM
i feel for you, tim! hope you get better soon. at least you got a poem from the experience...
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/16/2017 4:29:00 PM
Thanks ilene ...lol
Date: 5/16/2017 10:21:00 AM
No pain...no gain. :) At least that's what they say, but I never believed them. This one did hurt my friend, here's hoping that the physical therapy does trick and hurries up in the process.
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/16/2017 3:35:00 PM
So do I
Date: 5/16/2017 9:11:00 AM
Dr. Vaso's fix is only temporary and the after effects will leave you feeling like you've been beaten by another beast. sorry, doctor... Seriously, Tim, endurance is what you need to think of, and the good it will do in the long run. Then you march on as long as you like.
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/16/2017 3:35:00 PM
Thanks Lin...I think your advice is wise.
Date: 5/16/2017 8:47:00 AM
Dr Vaso has the pain medication ready LOL
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/16/2017 8:50:00 AM
Rum drip ...lol
Date: 5/16/2017 8:12:00 AM
aww Tim it must be tough going but it will be worth it when you are back to normal fitness and health again:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/16/2017 8:15:00 AM
Trying to push myself to that clearing Jan
Date: 5/16/2017 8:12:00 AM
Good morning my friend.... Can I join you in this tribute to physical therapy? LOL, the horror.
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Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 8:17:00 AM
Only if we can have a coffee after, and an hour of complaining!
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/16/2017 8:14:00 AM
Lol...come join me
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