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His death was so quick, no goodbye or farewell kiss; each day I replay this grief. In a moment gone, his eyes staring heavenward; at his tomb I weep. ___________________ August 18, 2017 Sedoka/Death Is Cruel Copyright Protected, ID 931651 Written for the contest, Oh, How I Miss You sponsor, Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer Eleventh Place

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Date: 8/24/2017 5:52:00 PM
Very lovely and heart-wrenching ... congrats, BW! <3
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Date: 8/24/2017 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations Broken Wings :)
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Date: 8/24/2017 5:34:00 PM
A beautiful memorial.
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Date: 8/20/2017 1:10:00 PM
An emotional write Wings...great Sedoka...hope all is well my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:50:00 AM
Such a beautiful written poem, yeah death is really cruel, you don t even know that what s going to happen in next moment, you can t even do anything apart from accepting it, remember this life is only to test us, we somehow have to pass it and make our God pleased, we all shall be reunited in Heaven, may God bless
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Date: 8/20/2017 7:38:00 AM
Reads like winning material..Way to go for the contest but I know that the grief must be hard..Sara
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:49:00 AM
Sara thanks for visiting my poem and for that nice comment
Date: 8/19/2017 11:42:00 PM
Gripping potent pen :) best of luck for the contest xomo
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:47:00 AM
Maureen thanks for visiting my poem and for the compliment
Date: 8/19/2017 9:08:00 PM
very emotive and skillfully done, Constance. You are in top form here, my friend. How goes everything for you? I enjoyed seeing your pics at FB. For some reason, I can't get it to let me post stuff today . Only I could do a few comments to folks
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:44:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, everything is okay with me, slowly recovering
Date: 8/19/2017 1:23:00 AM
Such sadness in your write my friend! The powerful images that you produce within your incredible poem is outstanding! What an amazing piece, depressing, but that is your end goal! Great Work!
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:41:00 AM
Russell thank you for the beautiful compliment
Date: 8/18/2017 10:31:00 PM
Truly heartbreaking. Well written and deeply express. Blessings! Dean
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:37:00 AM
Dean thanks for the visit and the encouragement
Date: 8/18/2017 6:04:00 PM
I find this a heartbreaking poem...only those that have met sadness know the true depth of its eyes
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:34:00 AM
Frederic thank you for visiting my poem appreciate
Date: 8/18/2017 2:54:00 PM
So true Broken Wings. I can relate to this. Well done and good luck in the contest !
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:31:00 AM
Heidi thanks for the compliment