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Death Is Cruel

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His death was so quick, no goodbye or farewell kiss; each day I replay this grief. In a moment gone, his eyes staring heavenward; at his tomb I weep. ___________________ August 18, 2017 Sedoka/Death Is Cruel Copyright Protected, ID 931651 Written for the contest, Oh, How I Miss You sponsor, Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer Eleventh Place

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/24/2017 5:52:00 PM

Very lovely and heart-wrenching ... congrats, BW! <3

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/24/2017 5:38:00 PM

Congratulations Broken Wings :)

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

Date: 8/24/2017 5:34:00 PM

A beautiful memorial.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/20/2017 1:10:00 PM

An emotional write Wings...great Sedoka...hope all is well my friend...god bless...^WW^

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/20/2017 9:50:00 AM

Such a beautiful written poem, yeah death is really cruel, you don t even know that what s going to happen in next moment, you can t even do anything apart from accepting it, remember this life is only to test us, we somehow have to pass it and make our God pleased, we all shall be reunited in Heaven, may God bless

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/20/2017 7:38:00 AM

Reads like winning material..Way to go for the contest but I know that the grief must be hard..Sara

Constance La France
Date: 8/20/2017 9:49:00 AM

Sara thanks for visiting my poem and for that nice comment

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/19/2017 11:42:00 PM

Gripping potent pen :) best of luck for the contest xomo

Constance La France
Date: 8/20/2017 9:47:00 AM

Maureen thanks for visiting my poem and for the compliment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2017 9:08:00 PM

very emotive and skillfully done, Constance. You are in top form here, my friend. How goes everything for you? I enjoyed seeing your pics at FB. For some reason, I can't get it to let me post stuff today . Only I could do a few comments to folks

Constance La France
Date: 8/20/2017 9:44:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, everything is okay with me, slowly recovering

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/19/2017 1:23:00 AM

Such sadness in your write my friend! The powerful images that you produce within your incredible poem is outstanding! What an amazing piece, depressing, but that is your end goal! Great Work!

Constance La France
Date: 8/20/2017 9:41:00 AM

Russell thank you for the beautiful compliment